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Would you paint me as a dirty "she" just because I slide your way
I will not refrain from delicious licks,nor could I read the other side
As I reach in closer to take you in,your every word,a virgin's guide

I learn within the silence,you sometimes do not know I'm there
Just perusing all you give to those,who give and take their share
Swallowed whole by your intellect,taken in by your fresh mind
Like a dive into the great unknown,never knowing what I'll find

Thank you for the stimulation,for the adjustment of my thighs
My butts planted on this chair,and it's becoming much more wise
Do not blush or turn away,just read this and surely know
You turn me on,you turn me loose,you allow my "self" to grow
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Turned On

Contributed by lovingwhispers on Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 12:17:06 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Am I naughty for my cheeky thoughts,as I read your mind at play
Would you paint me as a dirty "she" just because I slide your way
I will not refrain from delicious licks,nor could I read the other side
As I reach in closer to take you in,your every word,a virgin's guide

I learn within the silence,you sometimes do not know I'm there
Just perusing all you give to those,who give and take their share
Swallowed whole by your intellect,taken in by your fresh mind
Like a dive into the great unknown,never knowing what I'll find

Thank you for the stimulation,for the adjustment of my thighs
My butts planted on this chair,and it's becoming much more wise
Do not blush or turn away,just read this and surely know
You turn me on,you turn me loose,you allow my "self" to grow

Copyright © lovingwhispers ... [ 2010-07-26 00:17:06]
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Re: Turned On (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 12:24:27 AM AEST
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P.S. The "note" was supposed to say...
This is not sexual...simply a write about being turned on by someones mind :)

Re: Turned On (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 05:27:12 AM AEST
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Hi LW

No .... of course it's not sexual(???)

Personality, body, mind - it's whatever 'turns you
on', is it not? And this well-scripted provocative
piece of poetry proves that the mind is as alluring
as all the other bits and pieces.

Nice one!

Tommy

Re: Turned On (User Rating: 1 )
by andrewjones12 on Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 07:25:27 AM AEST
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"As I reach in closer to take you in,your every word,a virgin's guide"

magnificant! i loved this one LW your metaphor of attraction lead me on. you used a typical phrases of lust and used them as longing for knowlege, enlightenment of the others mind. clever as it was, it was also very appealing, as you are turned on by the attraction of a certains mind, i was attracted to this poem.
very well done.
-andrew.

Re: Turned On (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 08:24:50 AM AEST
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turned on indeed!! this is a very nice piece of writing, I love the subject matter and your total
expression of that subject is brilliant. well done.

Re: Turned On (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 09:14:02 AM AEST
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It is certainly a very cheeky little write, and I can imagine the devilish grin on your face as you were writing it.
Made my day pass with a smile, so thanks for that.

Steve

Re: Turned On (User Rating: 1 )
by Applethoughtrotten on Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 12:31:35 PM AEST
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Very good. Well writen with just enough metaphores to keep everyone happy.....Write On...Apple

Re: Turned On (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 07:46:04 PM AEST
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there's a certain tone in your wording :P I enjoyed this

Re: Turned On (User Rating: 1 )
by fuzzler on Wednesday, 4th August 2010 @ 12:52:27 AM AEST
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Reading this was like looking at the Mona Lisa's smile.... Is it for me? Athough i know it's not. THANKYOU>

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