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Array ( [sid] => 161362 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Are you ok? [time] => 2010-07-24 16:20:54 [hometext] => COMPLICATED. First love in HS & college for 3 years. She reluctantly broke up with me. To get over her I broke of communication and she didn’t want to. She didn’t have the best friends or family and I feel guilt for doing so. [bodytext] => My heart yearns to know that you’re ok

Clinging to a belief that you couldn’t
be without me. I do all that I can to forget
you but my true feelings that lay in my subconscious
no less appear. I love you so much that I see you
in my dreams. I did not ask for this. I didn’t beg you to
stay I just wanted you to be happy. I thought I knew best.
Maybe I did. Maybe I didn’t. Time has passed still you
have such a hold. Forgetting you is as impossible as
forgetting I have an arm or leg for you were as much
a part of me. Forcing a man to give up his duties of
protection and stability has left me confused and in
disarray. A heart that’s broken but seeks repair.

I search and search but cannot
find a similar love anywhere. When will this pain
and agony subside? I suppose a genuine heart that
genuinely loved cannot be stripped of its true nature.
I’ve come to find a love so sure, so concrete, so innocent
and rare can never be taken away. Perhaps a gift
so precious was never meant to be forgotten. So then
It is said, I loved you then and I will always love you

I just want to know that you’re ok.




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[comments] => 2 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 22 [informant] => DaveH [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Are you ok?

Contributed by DaveH on Saturday, 24th July 2010 @ 04:20:54 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



My heart yearns to know that you’re ok

Clinging to a belief that you couldn’t
be without me. I do all that I can to forget
you but my true feelings that lay in my subconscious
no less appear. I love you so much that I see you
in my dreams. I did not ask for this. I didn’t beg you to
stay I just wanted you to be happy. I thought I knew best.
Maybe I did. Maybe I didn’t. Time has passed still you
have such a hold. Forgetting you is as impossible as
forgetting I have an arm or leg for you were as much
a part of me. Forcing a man to give up his duties of
protection and stability has left me confused and in
disarray. A heart that’s broken but seeks repair.

I search and search but cannot
find a similar love anywhere. When will this pain
and agony subside? I suppose a genuine heart that
genuinely loved cannot be stripped of its true nature.
I’ve come to find a love so sure, so concrete, so innocent
and rare can never be taken away. Perhaps a gift
so precious was never meant to be forgotten. So then
It is said, I loved you then and I will always love you

I just want to know that you’re ok.




DaveH, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.

Number of poems per author per 24 hours are limited depending on membership level and interactivity.




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Re: Are you ok? (User Rating: 1 )
by dogsruleruby on Sunday, 25th July 2010 @ 10:49:26 AM AEST
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I like this, and I know how you feel.
I hope that you are able to connect with her again, and make sure she is indeed, okay.
I wish the best for you.
Have a great day, and I'll keep an eye out for your writing, you have talent.


Re: Are you ok? (User Rating: 1 )
by thebadguy9999 on Sunday, 25th July 2010 @ 11:57:30 AM AEST
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nice




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