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Array ( [sid] => 161334 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Heart on sleeve [time] => 2010-07-23 14:19:30 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Heart on sleeve

Empty pain, forgotten gain, constant rain,
Fretful tears, mishandled years, darkened fears
Weakened soul, unending hole, empty bowl

Then………

Ray of light, find some fight, hold on tight
Give a bit, start to fit, let go of it
Open eyes, joyful cries, sadness dies

Then……..

Heart on sleeve, I believe, relax and breath
Making plans, holding hands, wedding bands
Giving all, standing tall, feeling sure

Then……..

Cracks appear, down a gear, familiar fear
Feared day, slipping away, please stay
Unearthed lies, last goodbyes, cutting ties

Then……..

Old skin, nightmares begin, lights dim
Same old, no one to hold, growing cold
Faded dreams, ripped seams, sadness beams

Then……..

Flicker of light, in sight, hold tight

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Heart on sleeve

Contributed by quadira on Friday, 23rd July 2010 @ 02:19:30 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Heart on sleeve

Empty pain, forgotten gain, constant rain,
Fretful tears, mishandled years, darkened fears
Weakened soul, unending hole, empty bowl

Then………

Ray of light, find some fight, hold on tight
Give a bit, start to fit, let go of it
Open eyes, joyful cries, sadness dies

Then……..

Heart on sleeve, I believe, relax and breath
Making plans, holding hands, wedding bands
Giving all, standing tall, feeling sure

Then……..

Cracks appear, down a gear, familiar fear
Feared day, slipping away, please stay
Unearthed lies, last goodbyes, cutting ties

Then……..

Old skin, nightmares begin, lights dim
Same old, no one to hold, growing cold
Faded dreams, ripped seams, sadness beams

Then……..

Flicker of light, in sight, hold tight

Copyright Â© quadira ... [ 2010-07-23 14:19:30]
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Re: Heart on sleeve (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 23rd July 2010 @ 02:44:38 PM AEST
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Wow this is a fantastic, creative mystical write.
Great job.
blessings,
emy

Re: Heart on sleeve (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Friday, 23rd July 2010 @ 11:24:34 PM AEST
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Cleverly created roller coaster great rhythm and feel to this emphasising the theme in the best way it can be emphasised well written

Re: Heart on sleeve (User Rating: 1 )
by gypsydancer69 on Sunday, 25th July 2010 @ 05:16:48 AM AEST
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awesome sounds like u better hold on tight, to this one comein on flight

Re: Heart on sleeve (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 09:23:26 AM AEST
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The peaks and troughs of life illustrated for all to see here.
I like the way you handled this.

Steve

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