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Array ( [sid] => 16132 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => I Just Can't [time] => 2003-04-17 02:45:00 [hometext] => Written for a dear friend of mine, whos going through a difficult time. [bodytext] => I Just Can’t

You want me to let you back in,
To my heart, my home, my bed.
You want me to just forget,
Every hurtful thing you said.
You want me to pretend,
That my heart could never break,
You want me to forget,
That all you ever did was take.
You want me to laugh off,
All the things you do to make me cry,
You want me to explain,
All my reasons why.
You want me to forgive,
All the times you scream and rant.
You want me to….
But, I just can’t.

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Jeff_Scott_Morehead [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

I Just Can't

Contributed by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 02:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I Just Can’t

You want me to let you back in,
To my heart, my home, my bed.
You want me to just forget,
Every hurtful thing you said.
You want me to pretend,
That my heart could never break,
You want me to forget,
That all you ever did was take.
You want me to laugh off,
All the things you do to make me cry,
You want me to explain,
All my reasons why.
You want me to forgive,
All the times you scream and rant.
You want me to….
But, I just can’t.

Copyright Â© Jeff_Scott_Morehead ... [ 2003-04-17 02:45:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I Just Can't (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 11:52:44 AM AEST
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Well said. Blessed be,

~ Moonlit Angel

Re: I Just Can't (User Rating: 1 )
by psyonara on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 12:00:56 PM AEST
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quite sad... but a good poem, i like your use of form and structure. in a way it creates a unique atmosphere. good write! Helmut :+>

Re: I Just Can't (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 02:54:08 PM AEST
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Great write, Jeff..but why can't you forgive??
(just asking)..lol...didn't say you should...lol
Jenni

Re: I Just Can't (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 05:51:27 PM AEST
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wow, great write! so hard when someone lets you down, even harder when they expect to waltz right back into your life, like nothing transpired!
hugs n' love to you always nessa

Re: I Just Can't (User Rating: 1 )
by gery_giggles on Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 07:26:54 AM AEST
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great poem and i know what thats like

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