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[sid] => 161292
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => This Maze
[time] => 2010-07-21 11:37:26
[hometext] => A poem i wrote in 2009, i was twelve then.
[bodytext] => I've made up a lot of dreams over the course of my life, my days. I will never walk through them like a fog, a mist, a haze or put them behind me like a single childhood phase Because my dreams are real everyday they build a maze with walls made of steel and hundreds of pathways every pathway shows a dream over the course of my life, my days. My dreams are strong and real so they'll be here always This maze, i call my life because of its vexing ways It has its ups and downs, its dead ends and wrong ways But everyday is an adventure leaving me breathless, but amazed. These dead ends are reasons why I should just five up and die They'll try to make me cry about these deadends, these wrongways These strong walls are strong will that never leave me standing still, keep me trying to fulfill my dreams, my life, this maze. BennettP, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit. Number of poems per author per 24 hours are limited depending on membership level and interactivity. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 43 [informant] => BennettP [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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