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Array ( [sid] => 16128 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Stun Me WIth Your Smile, Freeze Me With Your Eyes [time] => 2003-04-17 01:25:00 [hometext] => another one where I don't know where it came from exactly...I was just thinkin then started writing and here was what I came up with....hope you like it! how about a better title suggestion as well? thanks! [bodytext] => You stun me with your smile
And cut me with it like no one ever before
You freeze me with your eyes
And I get struck by lightning when I see them
It strikes that part of me that's so in love with you
And you're the one that's setting my soul on fire

I used to never feel love for anyone
And you're the first one that I've felt these feelings for
And who I choose to love is up to me
What's someone like me supposed to do when they're in love
The feelings of that I feel, I wish you knew
And I wish there was a way to send my love to you

You stun with your smile
And it leaves me down on my knees
You freeze me with your eyes
And I can't help but become angered,
Angered because I could of been a piece of your life
But I blew it and now it seems I'll never be more than a fool to you

I used to never feel love for anyone
And you're the first one that I've felt these feelings for
And who I choose to love is up to me
What's someone like me supposed to do when they're in love
The feelings of that I feel, I wish you knew
And I wish there was a way to send my love to you [comments] => 4 [counter] => 225 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Stalkee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Stun Me WIth Your Smile, Freeze Me With Your Eyes

Contributed by Stalkee on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 01:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

You stun me with your smile
And cut me with it like no one ever before
You freeze me with your eyes
And I get struck by lightning when I see them
It strikes that part of me that's so in love with you
And you're the one that's setting my soul on fire

I used to never feel love for anyone
And you're the first one that I've felt these feelings for
And who I choose to love is up to me
What's someone like me supposed to do when they're in love
The feelings of that I feel, I wish you knew
And I wish there was a way to send my love to you

You stun with your smile
And it leaves me down on my knees
You freeze me with your eyes
And I can't help but become angered,
Angered because I could of been a piece of your life
But I blew it and now it seems I'll never be more than a fool to you

I used to never feel love for anyone
And you're the first one that I've felt these feelings for
And who I choose to love is up to me
What's someone like me supposed to do when they're in love
The feelings of that I feel, I wish you knew
And I wish there was a way to send my love to you

Copyright © Stalkee ... [ 2003-04-17 01:25:00]
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Re: Stun Me WIth Your Smile, Freeze Me With Your Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 03:56:28 AM AEST
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very effectively written a beatiful poem..God bless you.. venkat

Re: Stun Me WIth Your Smile, Freeze Me With Your Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 03:11:38 PM AEST
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i think the title is great, as is the whole poem.

Re: Stun Me WIth Your Smile, Freeze Me With Your Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 01:57:58 PM AEST
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Another title might be "Miss-match".

Despite our sophisticated intelligence we have still the basic procreative drive of all species which we recognise and respond to.

BUT....so instantly analytical is our developed mind that it immediately detects social overlays and warnings (whether genuine or false) that we develope to survive(succeed) in our complicated society.

The chances of finding total compatibility and love are 10,000,000 to 1........ most of us compromise and apply ourselves to making the best of what we've got

Re: Stun Me WIth Your Smile, Freeze Me With Your Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Sexygirl on Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 01:25:35 PM AEST
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Those killer smiles and you have to watch those eyes....I liked this one...well done....

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