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Array ( [sid] => 16126 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => ugly inside [time] => 2003-04-17 00:25:00 [hometext] => i still love her, despite my attempts to stop . . . [bodytext] => darling
you are everything
.U.G.L.Y.
inside of me
the poison & the tears
all the pain that i'm
__LONGING_______
to cut / to carve / to slice
A W A Y
you are the poison
stinging as it slides down throats
the heroin
lost inside my vein
(its irreversable )
i. fell. so. hard.
& broken hearts aren't mended
by scotch tape or
super glue
& i know i should just learn
how to HATE you
but every time the phone rings
with your name on caller ID
my heart
s.kip.s. a b.e.a.t.
even still
your hand + my hand =
bliss
this arthimetic problem could
N E V E R
add up
my paper's wearing thin from
erasers pressed down hard
trying to figure out
what numbers to add
to make you+me=<3
so ***** POINTLESS, i know
but every time our eyes connect
i'm reminded
of little IM boxes & text messages
of this digital teenage life
of hand-in-hand happiness
of "hello beautiful" grins
[you always were the most
beautiful person i know]
empty promises next to empty cuts
swearing that i'm OVER you
over the heartbreak & pain
always keeping in mind
you NEVER loved me
never cared ; never will
[or do i just tell myself that?]
this pain runs deep
my heart has been left weak
but as much as i want to
i just can't bare to
hate you. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 22 [informant] => mixedtape [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

ugly inside

Contributed by mixedtape on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 12:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

darling
you are everything
.U.G.L.Y.
inside of me
the poison & the tears
all the pain that i'm
__LONGING_______
to cut / to carve / to slice
A W A Y
you are the poison
stinging as it slides down throats
the heroin
lost inside my vein
(its irreversable )
i. fell. so. hard.
& broken hearts aren't mended
by scotch tape or
super glue
& i know i should just learn
how to HATE you
but every time the phone rings
with your name on caller ID
my heart
s.kip.s. a b.e.a.t.
even still
your hand + my hand =
bliss
this arthimetic problem could
N E V E R
add up
my paper's wearing thin from
erasers pressed down hard
trying to figure out
what numbers to add
to make you+me=<3
so ***** POINTLESS, i know
but every time our eyes connect
i'm reminded
of little IM boxes & text messages
of this digital teenage life
of hand-in-hand happiness
of "hello beautiful" grins
[you always were the most
beautiful person i know]
empty promises next to empty cuts
swearing that i'm OVER you
over the heartbreak & pain
always keeping in mind
you NEVER loved me
never cared ; never will
[or do i just tell myself that?]
this pain runs deep
my heart has been left weak
but as much as i want to
i just can't bare to
hate you.

Copyright © mixedtape ... [ 2003-04-17 00:25:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: ugly inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Eloise on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 01:10:36 AM AEST
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the style youve used here is so unique and fresh yet it works so well... good write... hope to read more...

Re: ugly inside (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 01:34:15 AM AEST
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nice write.
Michelle

Re: ugly inside (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 11:48:29 AM AEST
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I just love the style you used to write this! I've been in a similar situation, and my best advice is to give it time. Time heals all wounds, as cliche as that is. Blessed be,

~ Moonlit Angel

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