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Array ( [sid] => 161190 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Addiction [time] => 2010-07-17 08:11:37 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I miss her. No I don’t.

In the eyes of the sinner the white is god.
In the pale murky depths of my soul I see good intentions
I reach out, grab, scratch as the world flickers past me at a speed only a demon knows.

In the eyes of me, she is beauty.
I surrender my bones to the grasp of her darkness
I envoke the stress, the drama, the intensity just to remind me im alive
If I fail now, I fail forever. I’ve made my choice.

I will watch it fizzle and burn into the firey deadly depths of dissolve.
Till the mind creates its own warpath,
til the sky shatters its tears all over my brain.
As I stare into my own psychotic gaze the blaze in my head wont let me lie.
She taunts me. A myriad stream of light & dark on a direct course for collision.

I miss her. No I don’t.

In the eyes of the saint the white is devil.
In the glorious heat of my soul I see bad intentions.
I don’t try to reach out, I lay back, I surrender.





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Addiction

Contributed by misstee on Saturday, 17th July 2010 @ 08:11:37 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



I miss her. No I don’t.

In the eyes of the sinner the white is god.
In the pale murky depths of my soul I see good intentions
I reach out, grab, scratch as the world flickers past me at a speed only a demon knows.

In the eyes of me, she is beauty.
I surrender my bones to the grasp of her darkness
I envoke the stress, the drama, the intensity just to remind me im alive
If I fail now, I fail forever. I’ve made my choice.

I will watch it fizzle and burn into the firey deadly depths of dissolve.
Till the mind creates its own warpath,
til the sky shatters its tears all over my brain.
As I stare into my own psychotic gaze the blaze in my head wont let me lie.
She taunts me. A myriad stream of light & dark on a direct course for collision.

I miss her. No I don’t.

In the eyes of the saint the white is devil.
In the glorious heat of my soul I see bad intentions.
I don’t try to reach out, I lay back, I surrender.





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Re: Addiction (User Rating: 1 )
by Shane1024 on Saturday, 17th July 2010 @ 09:41:18 AM AEST
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Great write, explains a lot without going overboard. Good job.


Re: Addiction (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Saturday, 17th July 2010 @ 12:25:15 PM AEST
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Great hard hitting write highlighting the struggle well written


Re: Addiction (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 01:28:24 AM AEST
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well done, this really hits the spot, well expressed, more please.


Re: Addiction (User Rating: 1 )
by NicoleMichelle on Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 09:23:46 PM AEST
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i must say, this is a great poem.


Re: Addiction (User Rating: 1 )
by NicoleMichelle on Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 09:23:49 PM AEST
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i must say, this is a great poem.


Re: Addiction (User Rating: 1 )
by allforyou on Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 11:10:31 AM AEST
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As someone who also struggles with an addiction, every word of this spoke to me. I love how you started and finished it. This poem is seamless.

69 Days Clean,

Kara


Re: Addiction (User Rating: 1 )
by allforyou on Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 11:10:38 AM AEST
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As someone who also struggles with an addiction, every word of this spoke to me. I love how you started and finished it. This poem is seamless.

69 Days Clean,

Kara




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