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hey there.
Contributed by
andrewjones12
on
Wednesday, 14th July 2010 @ 07:06:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Returning memories are coming into the bliss seasons.
When arriving upon happiness stuck in your transversal hypnosis of loving contemporary mindless enjoyment.
Not one day, three seconds passing.
Every breath has one last happened.
Where will the sand carry us so softly?
Rise above our toes, and into our laughing.
Listen close to the thump of our blood pumping in masses,
which only happens when our love clashes.
A chirp of sweet song escapes in the wind. The humming bird hums as the blue jay did. It passed over summer blue skies, as I watched in aw through the refection of your eyes.
Time has been the obstacle protruding on this wonder. Where has it gone besides your smiles in my slumber?
I wonder…
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2010-07-14 07:06:01] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: hey there.
(User Rating: 1 ) by lesoleilnoire on
Wednesday, 14th July 2010 @ 08:30:11 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful poem. It captures how being away from a loved one can create an obstacle to enjoying life or even seeing anything good. I loved how after seeing your girilfriend you descibed the blood pumping. I could hear blood pumping as I read it. I also like how your see beautiful images of nature reflected in her eyes. Nicely done.
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