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Array ( [sid] => 161110 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Candle Light [time] => 2010-07-13 04:31:57 [hometext] => Have you ever wondered how I feel about you? [bodytext] =>
Imagine looking at 1000 shooting stars race across the night open sky.
How they twinkle, just like your lovely eyes.
Imagine looking at the sun set as you feel the warm breeze at the beach.
How I hold my pillow tight when your out of reach.
This Is how I feel with one glimpse of you.
If only you knew..
That this is what I feel for you.

You brighten the whole room.
You shine brighter than the moon.
You dance as the wind makes you swift side to side.
You realized that It's almost time to say goodbye.
The candle light is getting very dim.
Imagine how I feel.

At-least I will place you where no one has ever been.
You will remain In a secret place,
only I can find you..with a hidden trace.
The trail that will lead to my heart.
The place you have been from the start.

Your last remaints of wax;
are now on your plate.
My memories of you will last.
And I will accept the fact that your last remaints collapsed.

Imagine seeing the one you love, slip away.
When they promised they would stay.
You were like a candle light.

You gently faded away like a worn out feather.
You slowly slipped away cause nothing lasts forever.

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Candle Light

Contributed by evah2121 on Tuesday, 13th July 2010 @ 04:31:57 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



Imagine looking at 1000 shooting stars race across the night open sky.
How they twinkle, just like your lovely eyes.
Imagine looking at the sun set as you feel the warm breeze at the beach.
How I hold my pillow tight when your out of reach.
This Is how I feel with one glimpse of you.
If only you knew..
That this is what I feel for you.

You brighten the whole room.
You shine brighter than the moon.
You dance as the wind makes you swift side to side.
You realized that It's almost time to say goodbye.
The candle light is getting very dim.
Imagine how I feel.

At-least I will place you where no one has ever been.
You will remain In a secret place,
only I can find you..with a hidden trace.
The trail that will lead to my heart.
The place you have been from the start.

Your last remaints of wax;
are now on your plate.
My memories of you will last.
And I will accept the fact that your last remaints collapsed.

Imagine seeing the one you love, slip away.
When they promised they would stay.
You were like a candle light.

You gently faded away like a worn out feather.
You slowly slipped away cause nothing lasts forever.





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Re: Candle Light (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 13th July 2010 @ 05:20:43 AM AEST
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A bit sad but great writing.
Welcome to YPDC.
blessings,
emy


Re: Candle Light (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Tuesday, 13th July 2010 @ 10:33:24 AM AEST
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Very well written, sad but very touching.

Take care
Fuzzy


Re: Candle Light (User Rating: 1 )
by Sushila on Wednesday, 14th July 2010 @ 12:11:10 AM AEST
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Beautiful poetry.
Enjoyed reading thoroughly. Well done.


Re: Candle Light (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Writing_Master on Thursday, 15th July 2010 @ 01:16:13 PM AEST
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Very meaningful words, and such a wonderful sense of rhyme.


Re: Candle Light (User Rating: 1 )
by antikythera on Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 05:19:13 AM AEST
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"worn out feather" is a great line...."dance as the wind" is also good




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