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Array ( [sid] => 16108 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => final tiff..... [time] => 2003-04-16 18:25:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Gave all I had to the one before
thought I was done
no more to give
no reason to live

But then you told me
What I thought was true
I thought you were honest
Thought you were real

But now I see
You have no idea
How I feel
You were never honest
Never real

All I wanted was to love you
And treat you well
But i guess
You'd rather be hurt
Treated like dirt

So I have to turn my
Back on you
And walk away
Because you want
Your life this way

I would have always been
true to my word
But I can now see
You've never
Heard a word

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final tiff.....

Contributed by timmewolff on Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 06:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Gave all I had to the one before
thought I was done
no more to give
no reason to live

But then you told me
What I thought was true
I thought you were honest
Thought you were real

But now I see
You have no idea
How I feel
You were never honest
Never real

All I wanted was to love you
And treat you well
But i guess
You'd rather be hurt
Treated like dirt

So I have to turn my
Back on you
And walk away
Because you want
Your life this way

I would have always been
true to my word
But I can now see
You've never
Heard a word

Copyright © timmewolff ... [ 2003-04-16 18:25:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: final tiff..... (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 07:05:37 PM AEST
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heartfelt write
Michelle

Re: final tiff..... (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 09:48:19 PM AEST
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This is really, really good. Some people are just misery junkies, and if they're really determined to be addicted to pain, you're not going to be able to change them without putting up a damn good fight. Chances are it's not even worth it to try. Move on to someone who will appreciate your effort and all you have to offer, because clearly it's a lot. Great, heartfelt write. Blessed be,

~ Moonlit Angel

Re: final tiff..... (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 05:39:11 PM AEST
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awwww, sounds like from your end it was true, some people don't return the love, what can ya do? hugs nessa

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