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Array ( [sid] => 161068 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => new love [time] => 2010-07-10 07:56:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Am Laying here Breathing fresh air
Thinking about the ones that care
Am i wrong, right or fair ?
my feelings i would like to share
wid u..
my new love afair

Nthn is coming into my mind
Am looking at the time
Am sleepy but i wnna try..
Words i wanna rhyem
lemme start my actuall Poem..

Ur like an angle walking into My rythem Of melody
like a hero saving me out of my misary
LiKE Prince charming saving senderlly..
Tell me, really...
it is early to think about falling for u?
is this a new path for us >?
i dnt wanna go thru all off that pain again..
if i lose u..
i'll go back to the sad me
in the end u'll disapoint me
and no one well be there 4me

Lemme tell u
we dont know to where this can lead
our relationship can grow like a seed
but we dont know where we'll end up
Sadlly we dont know the future
but thats what makes life intersting
to a better start i ask
is this the roud to Our path ?
God Knows...:)

luv ya
<3 <3 <3

7/9/2010 Friday (( in zabadani u were on my mind ))



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new love

Contributed by hetlerkh on Saturday, 10th July 2010 @ 07:56:53 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Am Laying here Breathing fresh air
Thinking about the ones that care
Am i wrong, right or fair ?
my feelings i would like to share
wid u..
my new love afair

Nthn is coming into my mind
Am looking at the time
Am sleepy but i wnna try..
Words i wanna rhyem
lemme start my actuall Poem..

Ur like an angle walking into My rythem Of melody
like a hero saving me out of my misary
LiKE Prince charming saving senderlly..
Tell me, really...
it is early to think about falling for u?
is this a new path for us >?
i dnt wanna go thru all off that pain again..
if i lose u..
i'll go back to the sad me
in the end u'll disapoint me
and no one well be there 4me

Lemme tell u
we dont know to where this can lead
our relationship can grow like a seed
but we dont know where we'll end up
Sadlly we dont know the future
but thats what makes life intersting
to a better start i ask
is this the roud to Our path ?
God Knows...:)

luv ya
<3 <3 <3

7/9/2010 Friday (( in zabadani u were on my mind ))



Hetlerkh, if you wish to continue posting, PLEASE help keep this site INTERACTIVE by reading and commenting on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.

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Re: new love (User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on Saturday, 10th July 2010 @ 07:47:37 PM AEST
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Very expressive poem describing new love perfectly.

Heidi


Re: new love (User Rating: 1 )
by chrisdavid on Monday, 12th July 2010 @ 12:21:34 AM AEST
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Very nice poem but ruined, for me, by the spelling mistakes.


Re: new love (User Rating: 1 )
by pooja on Friday, 16th July 2010 @ 07:59:28 AM AEST
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Well it is about taking chances :)
Always a risk but then that's how u live deep :)
Nice.


Re: new love (User Rating: 1 )
by hetlerkh on Tuesday, 20th July 2010 @ 11:32:03 PM AEST
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ohh well guyz ! thank u ! really appreciate it from u all
n acctually just to mention its not like spellin mistakes .... its just acctually how i write ... u knw ...da chatin way .... just easier ! heh thx anywayzz :D mwah




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