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Array ( [sid] => 161053 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I could make her whole again [time] => 2010-07-09 13:23:52 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I didn’t realise that she was so broken
Still clinging to the past;
Attracted by opposites who words were falsely spoken
Hurt by so many promises, never meant to last:
Caught by an aperture within the blink of an eye
Not caring for the truth but preferring the lie,
She keeps returning to scene of the crime, why ?
Not wanting to break away with an attitude of never say day die:

All I can say to her is why don’t you try,
To save your life with someone who’s honest,
With a love that no one can buy
Instead of feeding the appetite of the hedonist:
She thinks she’s an egoist
but really she needs a hypnotist;
I am not a spy or following her when we meet,
We just happen to be walking in opposite directions but on the same street.

By John Connolly. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 75 [informant] => Eagle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

I could make her whole again

Contributed by Eagle on Friday, 9th July 2010 @ 01:23:52 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

I didn’t realise that she was so broken
Still clinging to the past;
Attracted by opposites who words were falsely spoken
Hurt by so many promises, never meant to last:
Caught by an aperture within the blink of an eye
Not caring for the truth but preferring the lie,
She keeps returning to scene of the crime, why ?
Not wanting to break away with an attitude of never say day die:

All I can say to her is why don’t you try,
To save your life with someone who’s honest,
With a love that no one can buy
Instead of feeding the appetite of the hedonist:
She thinks she’s an egoist
but really she needs a hypnotist;
I am not a spy or following her when we meet,
We just happen to be walking in opposite directions but on the same street.

By John Connolly.

Copyright Â© Eagle ... [ 2010-07-09 13:23:52]
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Re: I could make her whole again (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Friday, 9th July 2010 @ 02:18:25 PM AEST
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BRAVO! BRAVO! BRAVO! Roses at your feet John............this was a terrific poem. I loved this line....We just happen to be walking in opposite directions, but on the same street!"
Wonderful..............and WELCOME TO YPDC!
We're so glad you could join us here, Welcome aboard!
I'm looking forward to more of your lovely poetry, and :"catchy lines"
WArm love
consue

Re: I could make her whole again (User Rating: 1 )
by RAJNANDY on Friday, 9th July 2010 @ 10:03:03 PM AEST
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I LIKED AND ENJOYED READING THIS POEM FRIEND !
-Raj

Re: I could make her whole again (User Rating: 1 )
by pooja on Friday, 16th July 2010 @ 06:14:09 AM AEST
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This is a very good work.
anguish writ all over it
Well done friend. I love the last line.

"We just happen to be walking in opposite directions but on the same street."
Well-written.Bless you.

Re: I could make her whole again (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 20th May 2014 @ 10:21:47 AM AEST
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i especially love your second stanza; the
girl 'tis a bit of a mystery, i look forward to
more from you,

hugs n' love nessa

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