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Array ( [sid] => 161045 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Take my Breath Away [time] => 2010-07-09 07:33:35 [hometext] => my first shot at writing a song, please give me some opinions [bodytext] => It's just the little things
That do it for me
Your smile Is a beacon
When I'm lost at sea
And your eyes are a shelter
From all the rain
Brought on
By lifes hurricane
With you there's nothing
That gives me a scare
Even when
You have me gasping for air

You
take my breath away
Each and every day
And there's nothing else I can say
About what you to me
And if there ever was a time
That I didn't want a moment to fade
Believe me when I tell you girl
It's when you take my breath away

You really know
How to cut to my soul
And you
Fill the empty hole
That was missing in my heart
Untill you came along girl
Just like sun
you lit up my world
And it reminds me
Of your golden hair
And I could live forever
In a world with no air

You
take my breath away
Each and every day
And there's nothing else I can say
About what you to me
And if there ever was a time
That I didn't want a moment to fade
Believe me when I tell you
It's when you take my breath away

So I
Am telling you
That your the one
My heart belongs to
It's been yours
from the start
I dont want us to ever
to be apart
With you I don't
have a care
Cause it don't matter
If I take in anymore air

You
take my breath away
Each and every day
And there's nothing else I can say
About what you to me
And if there ever was a time
That I didn't want a moment to fade
Believe me when I tell you
It's when you take my breath away

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You Take my Breath Away

Contributed by bunit682 on Friday, 9th July 2010 @ 07:33:35 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

It's just the little things
That do it for me
Your smile Is a beacon
When I'm lost at sea
And your eyes are a shelter
From all the rain
Brought on
By lifes hurricane
With you there's nothing
That gives me a scare
Even when
You have me gasping for air

You
take my breath away
Each and every day
And there's nothing else I can say
About what you to me
And if there ever was a time
That I didn't want a moment to fade
Believe me when I tell you girl
It's when you take my breath away

You really know
How to cut to my soul
And you
Fill the empty hole
That was missing in my heart
Untill you came along girl
Just like sun
you lit up my world
And it reminds me
Of your golden hair
And I could live forever
In a world with no air

You
take my breath away
Each and every day
And there's nothing else I can say
About what you to me
And if there ever was a time
That I didn't want a moment to fade
Believe me when I tell you
It's when you take my breath away

So I
Am telling you
That your the one
My heart belongs to
It's been yours
from the start
I dont want us to ever
to be apart
With you I don't
have a care
Cause it don't matter
If I take in anymore air

You
take my breath away
Each and every day
And there's nothing else I can say
About what you to me
And if there ever was a time
That I didn't want a moment to fade
Believe me when I tell you
It's when you take my breath away

Copyright © bunit682 ... [ 2010-07-09 07:33:35]
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Re: You Take my Breath Away (User Rating: 1 )
by thebadguy9999 on Friday, 9th July 2010 @ 08:03:33 AM AEST
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pretty good

Re: You Take my Breath Away (User Rating: 1 )
by evah2121 on Friday, 9th July 2010 @ 12:35:32 PM AEST
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Beautiful writing :)

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