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The final moments before her breathing will cease
The strain in her face as she clings to each breath
The fear in her eyes as she waits for her death

Deaths rattle comes knocking like a foe at the door
In a moment or two she’ll be no more
“Can I come in its time that we meet
Let yourself go and accept your defeat”

She closes her eyes and opens the door
It enters inside and envelopes her core
Devouring the vapours of her weakened soul
All of her struggles have taken their toll

Deaths rattle steals each attempt to breath
“Come with me now we are going to leave
Fight it no more let your body release”
And she drifted away
Rest in Peace

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Deaths Rattle

Contributed by quadira on Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 03:08:48 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Final moments before eternal peace
The final moments before her breathing will cease
The strain in her face as she clings to each breath
The fear in her eyes as she waits for her death

Deaths rattle comes knocking like a foe at the door
In a moment or two she’ll be no more
“Can I come in its time that we meet
Let yourself go and accept your defeat”

She closes her eyes and opens the door
It enters inside and envelopes her core
Devouring the vapours of her weakened soul
All of her struggles have taken their toll

Deaths rattle steals each attempt to breath
“Come with me now we are going to leave
Fight it no more let your body release”
And she drifted away
Rest in Peace

Copyright Â© quadira ... [ 2010-07-08 15:08:48]
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Re: Deaths Rattle (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 06:58:41 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Realy good writing.
blessings,
emy

Re: Deaths Rattle (User Rating: 1 )
by thebadguy9999 on Friday, 9th July 2010 @ 08:42:58 AM AEST
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that was a pretty good poem,I loved it

Re: Deaths Rattle (User Rating: 1 )
by Manic on Monday, 19th July 2010 @ 03:13:15 AM AEST
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this poem really hit me, thank you!

Re: Deaths Rattle (User Rating: 1 )
by dogsruleruby on Sunday, 25th July 2010 @ 10:44:20 AM AEST
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Hmm, I like it.
Keep writing, I'll be sure to keep an eye out for your work.

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