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Your still you and I'm still me

You've gone and left
No longer to see

But this love for you won't let me be, it drives me crazy

But, without a blink, without a glance you just left with no thoughts of a second chance

I love you so much, but you don't love me

So I'll be strong
And set you fee

(If your love is true you'll come back to me)

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True Love?

Contributed by lovesucks on Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 04:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

It wasn't all it's cracked up to be,
Your still you and I'm still me

You've gone and left
No longer to see

But this love for you won't let me be, it drives me crazy

But, without a blink, without a glance you just left with no thoughts of a second chance

I love you so much, but you don't love me

So I'll be strong
And set you fee

(If your love is true you'll come back to me)

TAJ

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Re: True Love? (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 05:43:09 PM AEST
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Great write, the last line says it all.
Michelle

Re: True Love? (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 06:15:09 PM AEST
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words well spoken
Sharon

Re: True Love? (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 09:41:54 PM AEST
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Great rhymes. It flows well. I enjoyed it. Blessed be,

~ Moonlit Angel

Re: True Love? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 05:51:37 PM AEST
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Loved this!! Last line is so true... love your work so far!!
Jenni

Re: True Love? (User Rating: 1 )
by ThirtyDays on Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 08:09:08 PM AEST
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good poem.. u have been left at the scene of a crash too i see.. wondering what happened..

I'd love to have an exchange via discussion group about what we all think or feel is 'true love'... and how we feel it.. do we feel it only when we lose it? i'm sure it's different for everyone..

also.. if he or she doesn't love you.. why would you want them to come back? what if they come back out of convenience? scary thot this love stuff..

Re: True Love? (User Rating: 1 )
by lovesucks on Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 02:17:40 PM AEST
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Your so right interested in talking to you to my E-mail is tajohnson24@netscape.net let's chat

Re: True Love? (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 12:00:56 AM AEST
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get write and keep it up

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