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Something that time was left unsaid
That pinched me deep inside
Something was there lurking undead
That formed a ripple before the tide

Something that time was left untouched
That soon began to rot
Something was there that we wanted so much
That I could never thought

Something that time was left unfelt
That started to wither and perish
Something was there that hadn’t been dealt
That was meant to be loved and cherished

Something that time was left undone
That was waiting for us to try
Something was there that hadn’t begun
That was deciding to live or die

harsh, PLEASE help keep this site INTERACTIVE, by reading and commenting on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.

As of this submission and documentation, you have 8 poems posted yet only 1 interactive comment. Unless you want this to be your last post, at the very least, bring your comment to poem ratio to 1:1. Thank you.

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Something that Time

Contributed by harsh on Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 12:23:39 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Something That time

Something that time was left unsaid
That pinched me deep inside
Something was there lurking undead
That formed a ripple before the tide

Something that time was left untouched
That soon began to rot
Something was there that we wanted so much
That I could never thought

Something that time was left unfelt
That started to wither and perish
Something was there that hadn’t been dealt
That was meant to be loved and cherished

Something that time was left undone
That was waiting for us to try
Something was there that hadn’t begun
That was deciding to live or die

harsh, PLEASE help keep this site INTERACTIVE, by reading and commenting on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.

As of this submission and documentation, you have 8 poems posted yet only 1 interactive comment. Unless you want this to be your last post, at the very least, bring your comment to poem ratio to 1:1. Thank you.

Number of poems per author per 24 hours are limited depending on membership level and interactivity.

Copyright Â© harsh ... [ 2010-07-08 00:23:39]
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Re: Something that Time (User Rating: 1 )
by thebadguy9999 on Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 06:53:43 AM AEST
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good write

Re: Something that Time (User Rating: 1 )
by DayLilly on Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 12:25:45 PM AEST
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great:)

Re: Something that Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 10th July 2010 @ 04:38:51 AM AEST
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I've just been reading through your poems
And to be honest, I love them all.
You're expression and choice of words is excellent.
What I'd really love to see from you would be a free verse poem or two.
I think it'd just unlock even greater potential.
Cheers,
Mickey.

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