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LOVE
Contributed by
Sushila
on
Wednesday, 7th July 2010 @ 06:36:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The purity of my heart raves for you
With a love so deep like the ocean.
A mutual attraction, a spiritual pull,
I feel I've known you all my life.
You make me feel commendable,
Like a royal beauty queen.
I place all my love at your feet
With you beside my world is complete.
Copyright Sushila
Copyright ©
Sushila
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2010-07-07 18:36:15] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: LOVE
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Wednesday, 7th July 2010 @ 07:33:07 PM AEST (User
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Oh.. very sweet...
The expression of a real feeling makes it very sweet.
-venkat
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Re: LOVE
(User Rating: 1 ) by evah2121 on
Wednesday, 7th July 2010 @ 08:31:58 PM AEST (User
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This poem Is very Beautiful (:
Good work |
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Re: LOVE
(User Rating: 1 ) by nobodyJQ on
Friday, 9th July 2010 @ 05:16:09 AM AEST (User
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so brief and yet so rich in expressions.
good one. |
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