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Happy Birthday
Contributed by
dirk-velvet
on
Wednesday, 7th July 2010 @ 04:44:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
BirthdayPoems
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Happy Birthday !
May Your Day
Be Filled
With
Joy
And
Cake.
Copyright ©
dirk-velvet
... [
2010-07-07 16:44:34] (Date/Time posted on
site)
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Re: Happy Birthday
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 01:57:54 AM AEST (User
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i was pleasantly shocked when i read this, i was expecting a long, emotional poem lol.
the word 'cake' shapes this poem into fun and happiness
well done :) |
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Re: Happy Birthday
(User Rating: 1 ) by FLStatePoetryAmbassador on
Saturday, 18th December 2010 @ 08:02:14 AM AEST (User
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I didn't really get too much expression in this poem. The stanzas and structure of it is pretty interesting. |
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