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Sighs
Contributed by
bigj
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Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 12:03:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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These sighs are constant
for i let myself down
unable to build courage
unable to keem my feet on the ground
you alone make me fragile
scared of being broken
fear of being hurt
these words will never be spoken
for the words never
come out right
my emotions argue
the words fight
all i can do
is close my eyes
praying that this fear leaves
and you can hear my sighs
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Re: Sighs
(User Rating: 1 )
by thebadguy9999 on
Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 08:05:48 AM AEST
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| very nice write |
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Re: Sighs
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by lesoleilnoire on
Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 07:12:21 PM AEST
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Very well-written. You capture of emotion of fear well in this piece.
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Re: Sighs
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by smeethers on
Wednesday, 21st July 2010 @ 02:19:04 AM AEST
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| i like this poem alot :] |
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