Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	01-June 12:40:52 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 160910 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mud Memories [time] => 2010-07-02 21:48:55 [hometext] => I was depressed until I encountered some mud on a walk. [bodytext] => Monotonous moments mock meaning
until
a walk in the park
becomes
so much more.
Unavoidable miles of mud
welcome us.
My husband groans and swears(under his breath)
as his foot is cemented in the mud like concrete.
My daughter's foot is also stuck and
fear overcomes her.
I get her foot loose and then then begin laughing.
At first my husband, son, and daughter are upset and then
laughter echoes in between the forest's trees.
The moments in the mud of made lasting
impressions.
No soap will wash away these memories!

, [comments] => 6 [counter] => 521 [topic] => 54 [informant] => lesoleilnoire [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => happypoetry )

Mud Memories

Contributed by lesoleilnoire on Friday, 2nd July 2010 @ 09:48:55 PM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry

Monotonous moments mock meaning
until
a walk in the park
becomes
so much more.
Unavoidable miles of mud
welcome us.
My husband groans and swears(under his breath)
as his foot is cemented in the mud like concrete.
My daughter's foot is also stuck and
fear overcomes her.
I get her foot loose and then then begin laughing.
At first my husband, son, and daughter are upset and then
laughter echoes in between the forest's trees.
The moments in the mud of made lasting
impressions.
No soap will wash away these memories!

,

Copyright © lesoleilnoire ... [ 2010-07-02 21:48:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Mud Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Friday, 2nd July 2010 @ 10:33:57 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Heartfelt,very sincere and most pleasurable to read.
The imagery created with your words is excellent and I felt as though I was right there.
Well Done!
Blessings
LW

Re: Mud Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Unknown on Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 12:33:13 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Oh it's cute:D

It's the little moments like those that are the best!

Re: Mud Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by Debris on Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 05:36:46 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I love the reality of this poem- it's real life as it happens. Thanks for posting.

Re: Mud Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by thebadguy9999 on Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 08:08:03 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

good write. keep doin it

Re: Mud Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by Breezy on Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 07:13:23 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

So nice when something so simple can turn our
mood around and actually make us laugh out loud. :)
This was delightful and touching. Thank you for
sharing this. I love poems that can draw a smile.

Lovely post. -- Achelois

Re: Mud Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by courtseb on Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 01:57:39 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

lol I can so relate to this poem, be there done that! Very cute!

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com