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Im Ready
Contributed by
longhaircg
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Tuesday, 29th June 2010 @ 07:08:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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This is me the way I am just being me,
I love me for who I have become, everything undone,
I sing and dance, my silly dance,
I trance into places of chance,
I spead my love to those worthy,
let all others go.
Im beautiful so deep within,
bursting forth in songs I sing.
gathering energy throughout the day,
for under the moon I will sway,
fiery spitit come to light,
bring my true love the time is right.
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2010-06-29 07:08:11] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Im Ready
(User Rating: 1 ) by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 29th June 2010 @ 08:44:54 AM AEST (User
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this has a really nice flow to it, i like it a lot, well done. |
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Re: Im Ready
(User Rating: 1 ) by JettaV on
Tuesday, 29th June 2010 @ 09:48:20 AM AEST (User
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I liked the use of rhyming. good job!
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Re: Im Ready
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 1st July 2011 @ 05:44:52 AM AEST (User
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There is nothing wrong with being yourself and letting the world know who you are.
This is a great way of letting everyone know, I really enjoyed the simplicity of the message.
Steve |
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Re: Im Ready
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th May 2015 @ 07:34:27 PM AEST (User
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They say you can't love others unless you love yourself first, so sounds like you got a great start!
I really liked reading this as the smile grew on my face. I could feel the positive flow!
Thanks,
Tim |
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