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Array ( [sid] => 16084 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Live Life [time] => 2003-04-16 05:35:00 [hometext] => I get mad and to deal with my pain I write poems... PLEASE leave me a comment. [bodytext] => I live my life day by day
I try to think of things to say
I dont' know what to think anymore
I say goodbye as I walk out the door
Will this be the last time I see
See the world at how hard it can be
I have went through all the pain and strife
from the first day of my life
With all the fights that I've had
I never thought my life would seem so bad
From all the times I've tried to cope
Each time I come closer to loosing hope
One day I know, my life will be great
That'll be the day I change my fate. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 48 [informant] => shortgurl2006 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Live Life

Contributed by shortgurl2006 on Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 05:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I live my life day by day
I try to think of things to say
I dont' know what to think anymore
I say goodbye as I walk out the door
Will this be the last time I see
See the world at how hard it can be
I have went through all the pain and strife
from the first day of my life
With all the fights that I've had
I never thought my life would seem so bad
From all the times I've tried to cope
Each time I come closer to loosing hope
One day I know, my life will be great
That'll be the day I change my fate.

Copyright © shortgurl2006 ... [ 2003-04-16 05:35:00]
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Re: Live Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 10:07:53 AM AEST
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Such a tragic poem, but remember, life is what you make it and each day is a new beginning.

Re: Live Life (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 10:41:35 AM AEST
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life brings many challanges, yet without the sad and hard times, how would we see or recognize the beautiful? hugs n' much love n' happiness to you, nessa

Re: Live Life (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 04:14:16 PM AEST
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well written...i feel the same way as you...it wuz amazing to read a poem in which i could see a reflection of how i feel. *Jo

Re: Live Life (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 04:23:48 PM AEST
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Can't wait till that day! I hope it's everything you want it to be! Blessed be,

~ Moonlit Angel

Re: Live Life (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 01:53:06 PM AEST
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I am the writer of the poem and I thank you for all of your comments, they are very helpfull. I would like to let you know, that most of my poems that I write, I write from the feelings that I am feeling... I write when I am angry and I always feel better after I write a poem or two.

Re: Live Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Percursors on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 10:44:16 PM AEST
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omg! JJ this is really good...nice write...

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