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[aid] => mick
[title] => ONE FLAW IN WOMAN
[time] => 2010-06-24 13:01:38
[hometext] => I dedicate this poem to every woman who has never felt she was not worthy!
[bodytext] => ONE FLAW IN WOMAN By the time the Good Lord made a woman Six days of working overtime, she was finally done.  An angel appeared and said, "Lord, why are you spending so much time on this one?" "This one must be tough, I must really strengthen. She must have over 200 movable parts, all replaceable. Be able to run on diet cola, and leftovers, and still maintain a chuckle"  "A lap that will accommodate four children, and, Her kiss will heal any scrapped knee or broken heart, her spirit n'er dampen, She's going to be amazing, she will be capable of doing everything with just two hands!" The angel was astounded, "No way can she do everything with just two hands!" "This creation is so close to my own heart. She already heals herself when she is sick and can work 18 hours for a start" The angel moved closer, and touched her "But you've made her so soft, Lord," "Yes, but braver!" "She needs to be soft," the Lord agreed "But I've given her much endurance to succeed, You have no idea what she'll create or accomplish." The angel then asked, "Will she be able to think, or be closed-minded and prudish? "Wait until you see her negotiate, and reason. "Oops," said, the angel, as she touched the woman's cheek, she's leaking, see it glisten? I knew you were putting too much into this model!" "That's not a leak," the Lord corrected that's her "Heart's Level!" "Overly joyed, or overly sad, her heart will overflow with tears These "heart drops" will appear for those she endears." They will express her sorrow, her pain, her disappointment, her love her grief, and loneliness The angel was very impressed, "You are a Genius Lord, You thought of everything! The woman you created is filled with Goodness!" "That she is," the Lord exclaimed and her strengths will amaze all mankind. She will bear hardships, and carry burdens of every kind. yet....... She will hold on to happiness, love, and joy Smile when she wants to scream, and destroy!" "Sing when she wants to cry, and cry when she is happy. She may be exhausted, but remain bubbly. She will laugh when she is nervous, but fight to the death for what she believes to be precious!" "She will engage a "Buzz-saw" for injustice. She won't take "No" for an answer. and, will fight to solve a problem, she's fearless! She will go without, so her family can have. Go to the Drs. with a frightened friend, their heart to salve!" "She will love unconditionally, and cry when her children excel, She cheers when her friends children get awards, fortune foretell. She loves birthdays and a wedding and, When a friend dies, her heart will break, no end to her mourning!" "To lose a dear family member tremendous loss..... Yet, she will continue to carry on for the sake of others, 'midst complete chaos.! She will know that a hug, and kiss can heal a broken heart, or bumped knee Furiously loyal, your secrets, your buddy!" "I'm going to make her in all shapes, sizes and colors. She will drive, fly, walk, run, or email you to show she cares, and she'll give to beggars. Her whole life will be centered around the man she loves dearly. She will support, defend, and even give her life for him humbly! The angel marvels, "Gee, Lord, I truly believe you've created her perfectly! Yes, everything I create is perfect, but she will always think she is not worthy That is her one flaw, and so I will cover her with tremendous love to protect her emotionally. I will place Myself, My son, and her Loving husband over her, to care for her and love her deeply!" My dear friend Pat sent this to me in an email ~Author unknown~ The Poem is mine Lovingcritters  June 24, 2010 Sure Enough, God created man before woman. But then you always make a rough draft before the final masterpiece. ~Author Unknown~ *Prejudice Smiles* Thanks so much Pat for the lovely email [comments] => 7 [counter] => 6006 [topic] => 55 [informant] => lovingcritters [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
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