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Array ( [sid] => 160742 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => all the things [time] => 2010-06-23 11:37:16 [hometext] => I wrote this in under ten minutes on a freewrite thing. Im eighteen years old and sometimes dont you wish you could see what your going to be like in the future. well this is what was on my mind and i sort of made it into a poem..... [bodytext] =>



I wish that I could only see
For a moment, the possibilities inside of me.

All the things I could do,
All the dreams I could make true,
All the wishes in my head,
All the fear I will dread,
All the hopes I embrace,
All the success I could grace,
All the love I create,
All the differences I will trait,
All what will be my fate,
wishing I could see, but with hope comes wait.




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all the things

Contributed by dillybar on Wednesday, 23rd June 2010 @ 11:37:16 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems







I wish that I could only see
For a moment, the possibilities inside of me.

All the things I could do,
All the dreams I could make true,
All the wishes in my head,
All the fear I will dread,
All the hopes I embrace,
All the success I could grace,
All the love I create,
All the differences I will trait,
All what will be my fate,
wishing I could see, but with hope comes wait.




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Re: all the things (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Wednesday, 23rd June 2010 @ 12:16:41 PM AEST
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Great opening two lines and then the encapsulation of looking forward wondering what lies ahead enjoyed this well written


Re: all the things (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Wednesday, 23rd June 2010 @ 01:49:19 PM AEST
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well done
reminds me of when I was young and didn't know
how to express myself.


Re: all the things (User Rating: 1 )
by brialuv on Thursday, 24th June 2010 @ 12:46:29 PM AEST
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i definently knw wht ur talking about sometimes i sit and wonder the same thing but exactly like you said "with hope comes wait."




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