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Array ( [sid] => 160614 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pour. [time] => 2010-06-15 18:05:36 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Needles to say
when death has befallen you,
The reigns over your fate
That strangle-
Tear your neck like thorned chains,
will be broken.
No more will such
Blatantly insignificant faults
encumber you.

But the men who drove you,
who choked fear into you
and in doing so, brought you

So

Very

Close to your gun.
Your rope.
Your canvas to start again.

Those men are not in control.
The bliss of peace
should not come so close.
Struggle for living joy will resume.

Grasp your life
with your worn
solemn hands and pursue
your earthly happiness.
Redirect what others
have led astray.

Pay no mind to men who drive you so close to peace. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Smigit [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Pour.

Contributed by Smigit on Tuesday, 15th June 2010 @ 06:05:36 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Needles to say
when death has befallen you,
The reigns over your fate
That strangle-
Tear your neck like thorned chains,
will be broken.
No more will such
Blatantly insignificant faults
encumber you.

But the men who drove you,
who choked fear into you
and in doing so, brought you

So

Very

Close to your gun.
Your rope.
Your canvas to start again.

Those men are not in control.
The bliss of peace
should not come so close.
Struggle for living joy will resume.

Grasp your life
with your worn
solemn hands and pursue
your earthly happiness.
Redirect what others
have led astray.

Pay no mind to men who drive you so close to peace.

Copyright © Smigit ... [ 2010-06-15 18:05:36]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Pour. (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Wednesday, 16th June 2010 @ 01:12:04 AM AEST
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great write! well put together and well expressed. more please.

Re: Pour. (User Rating: 1 )
by andrewjones12 on Wednesday, 16th June 2010 @ 08:04:13 AM AEST
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i like it, it was moving. please read a few of mine, you may find them relevant as well.
keep it up.

Re: Pour. (User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on Wednesday, 16th June 2010 @ 08:33:33 PM AEST
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Excellent writing. I like the message here. It has a powerful theme about living for oneself and not letting others bring one down. Great poem. Powerful!

Heidi

Re: Pour. (User Rating: 1 )
by joe-joe on Tuesday, 22nd June 2010 @ 09:26:15 AM AEST
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nice write, I like this....

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