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Words spoken in hopes that someone will hear
As we bough our heads in prayers
Today our future is filled with so much fears
Families torn apart to do their parts
Sadness in the eyes of a child as they say their goodbyes
From this day we carry our loved ones in our hearts
I held your picture today in my hands as tears filled my eyes
Your daughter of three cries night after night
I know your gone and wish for your arms to hold me as I cry
No one knows what the outcome will be
When I hold your daughter, I see you
My heart misses you, as you hold the key
To a love that is so true
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The Ones Left Behind

Contributed by cindy359 on Friday, 11th June 2010 @ 06:28:21 PM in AEST
Topic: war

To live in a world where no one cares
Words spoken in hopes that someone will hear
As we bough our heads in prayers
Today our future is filled with so much fears
Families torn apart to do their parts
Sadness in the eyes of a child as they say their goodbyes
From this day we carry our loved ones in our hearts
I held your picture today in my hands as tears filled my eyes
Your daughter of three cries night after night
I know your gone and wish for your arms to hold me as I cry
No one knows what the outcome will be
When I hold your daughter, I see you
My heart misses you, as you hold the key
To a love that is so true

Copyright © cindy359 ... [ 2010-06-11 18:28:21]
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Re: The Ones Left Behind (User Rating: 1 )
by Lee on Friday, 11th June 2010 @ 06:56:46 PM AEST
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this is touching.
bitter sweet.

thanks.

Re: The Ones Left Behind (User Rating: 1 )
by chrisdavid on Saturday, 12th June 2010 @ 03:30:37 AM AEST
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Very good and very true. It must be difficult to just wait and hope everything turns out okay. I hope you and your daughter see him return safely.
All the best and take care, Chris.

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