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Unveiling secrets
That Vanished within the fog
The breaching and the passage
Of mysteries that proved us wrong

At the speed of light we travel
Through a river of massless fabric
We will spend a hundred days
And watch the world in static

From up here we see the bombs exploding
Years before they were set to engaged
Traveling at the light speed of gamma rays
100 years have passed in 10 lightyear days

Whilst, we return to a world we once knew
Years of carnage and distruction imbedded the dunes
Somewhere in the chaos, all that we know was lost
Can we travel back through time, and at what cost?
The wormhole theory and it's paradox of fiction
Leaves them to rebuild mankind in their premonition
The martyrs of physics aboard apollo-duration-one
Are burdened with this mission under an aging sun..
Burning... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 327 [topic] => 53 [informant] => lucid_tides [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => scifi )

A World in Static

Contributed by lucid_tides on Thursday, 10th June 2010 @ 02:14:12 PM in AEST
Topic: scifi

Alast!
Unveiling secrets
That Vanished within the fog
The breaching and the passage
Of mysteries that proved us wrong

At the speed of light we travel
Through a river of massless fabric
We will spend a hundred days
And watch the world in static

From up here we see the bombs exploding
Years before they were set to engaged
Traveling at the light speed of gamma rays
100 years have passed in 10 lightyear days

Whilst, we return to a world we once knew
Years of carnage and distruction imbedded the dunes
Somewhere in the chaos, all that we know was lost
Can we travel back through time, and at what cost?
The wormhole theory and it's paradox of fiction
Leaves them to rebuild mankind in their premonition
The martyrs of physics aboard apollo-duration-one
Are burdened with this mission under an aging sun..
Burning...

Copyright © lucid_tides ... [ 2010-06-10 14:14:12]
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Re: A World in Static (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Friday, 11th June 2010 @ 07:33:51 PM AEST
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Good job.

always, abraham

keep writing

Re: A World in Static (User Rating: 1 )
by Voyager on Friday, 14th January 2011 @ 01:52:04 AM AEST
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That was very well written. I liked it mainly because of the synthesis between scientific theory and flowing poetry. Sometimes we tend to get carried away in theories and forget the poetry but you stuck to beautiful descriptions, and a dark and deep sense of melancholy and peril. Great write.

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