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Array ( [sid] => 16050 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => ten minutes in the snow [time] => 2003-04-15 17:45:00 [hometext] => i got off work early yesterday and arrived home before my husband... it was snowing about 15 minutes from our home up the freeway and he saw it on his way home... he took me to the snow for 10 minutes and this resulted in this writing... [bodytext] => "close your eyes, little wife
peer upon a blanket of snow
tilt your lips up to mine
and embrace this husband of your choosing"

dressed in black and blood red velvet
boots war-torn below her knees
red hair glistening with snowflakes
a spiked collar encircles her nape

the pines so tall and majestic
a magickal river runs below
peace and serenity in this small valley
piercing blue eyes stare down at the witch

snow white fingers fold into cherokee hands
his cargo jeans rustling in the quiet storm
she touches his cheek so softly
as rings of white-gold become one

this tiny moment frozen in time
where husband and wife hear only their hearts beat
a mystickal journey can take ten minutes
yes, for this, it is worth it

april 14, 2003 [comments] => 9 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 30 [informant] => LadyDama [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => PoemsonBeauty )
ten minutes in the snow

Contributed by LadyDama on Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 05:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: PoemsonBeauty



"close your eyes, little wife
peer upon a blanket of snow
tilt your lips up to mine
and embrace this husband of your choosing"

dressed in black and blood red velvet
boots war-torn below her knees
red hair glistening with snowflakes
a spiked collar encircles her nape

the pines so tall and majestic
a magickal river runs below
peace and serenity in this small valley
piercing blue eyes stare down at the witch

snow white fingers fold into cherokee hands
his cargo jeans rustling in the quiet storm
she touches his cheek so softly
as rings of white-gold become one

this tiny moment frozen in time
where husband and wife hear only their hearts beat
a mystickal journey can take ten minutes
yes, for this, it is worth it

april 14, 2003




Copyright © LadyDama ... [ 2003-04-15 17:45:00]
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Re: ten minutes in the snow (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 07:24:13 PM AEST
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very beautiful
Sharon


Re: ten minutes in the snow (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 07:37:37 PM AEST
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your poem is so charming and delightful thank you for sharing this special moment in time with us:) hugs nessa


Re: ten minutes in the snow (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 08:51:29 PM AEST
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Ahhh...sounds magical!!!!
Jenni


Re: ten minutes in the snow (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 12:08:14 AM AEST
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Romantic and full of love.Well done
Michelle


Re: ten minutes in the snow (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 01:28:43 AM AEST
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ery beautiful and very happy. venkat


Re: ten minutes in the snow (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 06:27:08 PM AEST
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Just popped over to admire the view
thought "the gang" might be here to
a lovely scene so crisp and clear
70 farenheit over here.



Re: ten minutes in the snow (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 11:03:49 PM AEST
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Lovely ... wonderful images and beautifully written ... Jan


Re: ten minutes in the snow (User Rating: 1 )
by Bizzy on Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 06:37:21 AM AEST
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Hello, LadyDama, A beautiful poem! An opportunity seized! A memory for eternity!
Friend Bizzy


Re: ten minutes in the snow (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 04:08:56 PM AEST
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ah, what a beautiful scene, and how cleverly you have portrayed it. Wonderful.
x_x_x




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