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[aid] => Mick
[title] => The mind's eye
[time] => 2003-04-15 16:45:00
[hometext] => This was inspired by an exchange of comments between Nessa (Ladyfawn) and Yvonne (Springchick)
[bodytext] => I've given up on TV
there's not much on to see
my eyes start going bleary
at their faded "tapestry"
With repeated dreary images
our gaze they try to fetter
I much prefer Y-P-D-C
the pictures are so much better
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The mind's eye
Contributed by
wrybod
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Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 04:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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I've given up on TV
there's not much on to see
my eyes start going bleary
at their faded "tapestry"
With repeated dreary images
our gaze they try to fetter
I much prefer Y-P-D-C
the pictures are so much better
Copyright ©
wrybod
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2003-04-15 16:45:00]
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Re: The mind's eye
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 06:03:34 PM AEST
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| how sweet, to think a comment can inspire so..... hugs to ya, Val |
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Re: The mind's eye
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 07:27:07 PM AEST
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you are quite right
Sharon |
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Re: The mind's eye
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 10:00:37 PM AEST
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| this is so cute and unique, your mind is special i have always thought so, lol, and honestly, yes, the pictures here are much better!! hugs nessa |
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Re: The mind's eye
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by springchic1979 on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 10:18:36 PM AEST
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What a wonderful, sweet little poem Wrybod!
With Nessa around to brighten up one's day with positive feedback and insight it really does make YPDC so much more enjoyable.
Yvonne |
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Re: The mind's eye
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 12:12:20 AM AEST
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I love this poem, yes the picture is better here!!
Michelle |
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Re: The mind's eye
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 01:02:47 AM AEST
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| It is "eye" who am inspired (to write this horrible pun) please forgive........... |
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Re: The mind's eye
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 01:04:38 AM AEST
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| I think one can say the same about books. |
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Re: The mind's eye
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 01:10:38 AM AEST
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Well I suppose when something's "kicked around" as long as my mind has....... it's bound to behave "strangely" now and then !
Seriously .......thanks a million |
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Re: The mind's eye
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 01:22:04 AM AEST
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Yvonne (Sorry I tagged a "k" on the end of your pen name).
I suppose the thought for this poem had been lurking in the back of my mind but it took your exceptional talent and exchange with Nessa, to suddenly make it crystalise and jump out.
I think you and I have much in common in our inclination to reply to people who take the trouble to comment.
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Re: The mind's eye
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 01:25:25 AM AEST
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| It's a great place. I still don't understand how to use it to the full. |
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Re: The mind's eye
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 01:58:54 AM AEST
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Dear Wrybod,You are 100 per cent correct. I left that box many days ago save that discovery channel.
Y.P.D.C has become a part of our life..and here only I am able to see learned friends like you.. venkat |
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Re: The mind's eye
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 02:04:20 AM AEST
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*like a moth to a flame* lol...i have been thinking about how you 'saw' and did this, by observing the dialog between yvonne and myself, she's one of my dearest friends here, and i have to say i find what you did the essence of poetry... the very beating heart of ypdc... meaning that your poetic soul is so beautiful, your vision an inspiration, i am honored to know you:) hugs nessa
p.s. but we both are shaking our heads as to where we said it rofl ! |
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Re: The mind's eye
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 03:13:33 AM AEST
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| As usual, dear friend, you have returned my feelings exactly |
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Re: The mind's eye
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by LadyDama on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 12:07:52 PM AEST
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i cannot rhyme today
so i shall just say
you've hit it on the head
blessings on what you've said... |
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Re: The mind's eye
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 06:13:44 PM AEST
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There's a lovely picture
on another site
the gang's all there
so i think I might
just pop across
and enjoy the glow
that you project
in the April snow. |
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Re: The mind's eye
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by wolfflow on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 10:05:51 AM AEST
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| excellent, very clever, i love it |
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Re: The mind's eye
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by Wrybod on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 10:58:09 AM AEST
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| On the same day I was similarly impressed by your "Conciouss of conscience" |
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