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promise me you'll try
Contributed by
vicky_cross1990
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Tuesday, 8th June 2010 @ 02:46:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Stories like this can't be true,
I must have been dreaming.
Speech disappears into silence,
A world with no more light.
Born into emptyness,
I'll learn to find my way in darkness.
All i want is freedom,
A world with no more light.
Save me from my solitude,
Promise me you'll try.
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Re: promise me you'll try
(User Rating: 1 ) by iodinelove on
Tuesday, 8th June 2010 @ 06:22:28 PM AEST (User
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Who in solitude needs saving? It is not from solitude one needs to be saved, but from loneliness.
Anyway, a thoughtful write
always, abraham |
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Re: promise me you'll try
(User Rating: 1 ) by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 9th June 2010 @ 01:05:14 AM AEST (User
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good write and with a deep meaning although i have to confess i actively seek solitude and in that solitude i am never lonely. all the same, i like this poem, well done. |
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