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promise me you'll try

Contributed by vicky_cross1990 on Tuesday, 8th June 2010 @ 02:46:17 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Stories like this can't be true,
I must have been dreaming.
Speech disappears into silence,
A world with no more light.
Born into emptyness,
I'll learn to find my way in darkness.
All i want is freedom,
A world with no more light.
Save me from my solitude,
Promise me you'll try.



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Re: promise me you'll try (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Tuesday, 8th June 2010 @ 06:22:28 PM AEST
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Who in solitude needs saving? It is not from solitude one needs to be saved, but from loneliness.

Anyway, a thoughtful write

always, abraham


Re: promise me you'll try (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Wednesday, 9th June 2010 @ 01:05:14 AM AEST
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good write and with a deep meaning although i have to confess i actively seek solitude and in that solitude i am never lonely. all the same, i like this poem, well done.




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