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Array ( [sid] => 160398 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Recovery [time] => 2010-06-06 16:40:41 [hometext] => Late 2009-present i've forgotten why i started writing, this is the journey into why and how, it's a thank you to everyone whos ever read my work no matter how rediculous and a promise i will improve and better myself. Thank you. [bodytext] => Just over two years ago i bled myself dry over a bit of paper.
It wasnt for emotional admittance nor was it out of a desire to find a connection.
How can you connect to something you feel no connection to?
Regardless this is my open letter to everyone who's took the time to understand.
None of this is ever planned.
It's never something i can recite off the top of my head.
It's not something without i'd be dead.
Cause i'd still be alive and floating in this sea
Of emotionally driven knocks and lessons i've learnt you see.
Sometimes i write to keep my head above the sea floor.
It starts out as a trickle of words and into a outpour
Im not legally a man and i've never lived a life yet.
It's not something i want to put on my 'to do list'

I've learnt from all my mistakes now
Can one re-learn to re-feel.
This is all very selfish, i could use the lessons i've been forced to take notice
To help someone who would be so kind to take a moment to notice me
Then it hit me, I dont write for satisfaction nor do i write for glorification.
I write because i've been blessed with a pityful donation.
A connection to those who have been in my shoes or are to wear them to walk alone.
Someones been down the same road and your not ever alone.

Thank you, this is a open promise i will better myself.





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Recovery

Contributed by liamleash on Sunday, 6th June 2010 @ 04:40:41 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems



Just over two years ago i bled myself dry over a bit of paper.
It wasnt for emotional admittance nor was it out of a desire to find a connection.
How can you connect to something you feel no connection to?
Regardless this is my open letter to everyone who's took the time to understand.
None of this is ever planned.
It's never something i can recite off the top of my head.
It's not something without i'd be dead.
Cause i'd still be alive and floating in this sea
Of emotionally driven knocks and lessons i've learnt you see.
Sometimes i write to keep my head above the sea floor.
It starts out as a trickle of words and into a outpour
Im not legally a man and i've never lived a life yet.
It's not something i want to put on my 'to do list'

I've learnt from all my mistakes now
Can one re-learn to re-feel.
This is all very selfish, i could use the lessons i've been forced to take notice
To help someone who would be so kind to take a moment to notice me
Then it hit me, I dont write for satisfaction nor do i write for glorification.
I write because i've been blessed with a pityful donation.
A connection to those who have been in my shoes or are to wear them to walk alone.
Someones been down the same road and your not ever alone.

Thank you, this is a open promise i will better myself.





liamleash, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.

Please bring your comment to poem ratio to at least 1:1. Thank you.




Copyright © liamleash ... [ 2010-06-06 16:40:41]
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Re: Recovery (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 6th June 2010 @ 05:47:17 PM AEST
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Wow, this is very touching and a very good, strong write.
Hang in there 'cause your humbleness will bring you many hours of inner peace.
Big huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy


Re: Recovery (User Rating: 1 )
by joe-joe on Friday, 11th June 2010 @ 10:30:35 AM AEST
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very nice write...and the only thing anyone can do is better themselves, for if I better myself, I will improve everyone around me...




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