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Array ( [sid] => 16033 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Understanding Life [time] => 2003-04-15 10:35:00 [hometext] => Life is somewhat a puzzle to me,
the peices I'm yet to find,
putting them together will set me free,
from these guestions in my mind! [bodytext] => Theres things in life I can't understand,
Nor could I even try,
like thoughts & feelings of man,
who often make you cry,

Theres things I just can not get,
no matter how hard I think,
going through the traces,as I sit,
tears falling when I blink,

Often I wonder when will I know,
how can I tell,
when will the answers show,
will it be easy to spell?

So much left unanswered,
In this game we call life,
some of it seems like a blur,
so much left to strife,

Why can't someone tell me,
What I want to hear,
will I fulfill my destiny,
this is what I fear,

wonder why I never get a break,
why things never go my way,
I always give,never take,
will I ever get my day?

Life is somewhat a puzzle to me,
The peices I'm yet to find,
putting them together,will set me free,
from these guestions in my mind!
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Understanding Life

Contributed by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 10:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Theres things in life I can't understand,
Nor could I even try,
like thoughts & feelings of man,
who often make you cry,

Theres things I just can not get,
no matter how hard I think,
going through the traces,as I sit,
tears falling when I blink,

Often I wonder when will I know,
how can I tell,
when will the answers show,
will it be easy to spell?

So much left unanswered,
In this game we call life,
some of it seems like a blur,
so much left to strife,

Why can't someone tell me,
What I want to hear,
will I fulfill my destiny,
this is what I fear,

wonder why I never get a break,
why things never go my way,
I always give,never take,
will I ever get my day?

Life is somewhat a puzzle to me,
The peices I'm yet to find,
putting them together,will set me free,
from these guestions in my mind!

Copyright © LOWMAN613 ... [ 2003-04-15 10:35:00]
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Re: Understanding Life (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 11:32:57 AM AEST
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this is great, Christina... i love it!!... great pondering... blessings...

Re: Understanding Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 03:03:44 PM AEST
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you need to carry a bag of tools around, stand up and be strong, for one day you will have to part with all you love, and you must carry on, hugs to you, Val

Re: Understanding Life (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 04:30:54 PM AEST
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This is a wonderful poem Christinia. If you find the answer shoot it my way Im pondering too.
Love Michelle

Re: Understanding Life (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 09:08:23 PM AEST
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wow! great write! i think we only find out a little bit at a time and if we knew it all at once we would explode lol
hugs nessa

Re: Understanding Life (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 02:12:40 AM AEST
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I can understand my friend's feelings .. It is a very good write. venkat

Re: Understanding Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Bizzy on Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 03:20:57 PM AEST
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Dear Christina, Lightening just shut me down at the end of my comment to you, so... if you get two, you know why. Understanding Life was an excellent piece of writing. We all have those days, sometimes more often. Even at my age, which is more peaceful than my youth was, I still have those moments of hurt and anger. My faith in God was my key and I know you have that. Otherwise, I found much help in books concerning communication and behavioral therapy. Love, Friend Bizzy

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