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Array ( [sid] => 160255 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dear Someone [time] => 2010-05-30 17:44:37 [hometext] => [bodytext] => May 25, 2010

When ALL you tell me is what I should
and shouldn't do, what is right and what is wrong,
it only presses in the point of how utterly incapable I am.
I then turn inward with a triggered desire to rebel,
as though its a way to hold onto some aspect of self-worth.
Do not cover me with your shame and disapproval.
You proclaim over me ignorance with your careless words, stupidity.
Oh but stupid I am not, I see into a world you cannot comprehend.
I wash off the presumptions your words suggest.
Guess what, I am doing the best that I can...
and that is enough, I do not live subject to your standards.
You do not own me, no you don’t even see me;
you do not know who I am. I am so much more.
More than your view will ever see. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 65 [informant] => Grace_and_Glory [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

Dear Someone

Contributed by Grace_and_Glory on Sunday, 30th May 2010 @ 05:44:37 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

May 25, 2010

When ALL you tell me is what I should
and shouldn't do, what is right and what is wrong,
it only presses in the point of how utterly incapable I am.
I then turn inward with a triggered desire to rebel,
as though its a way to hold onto some aspect of self-worth.
Do not cover me with your shame and disapproval.
You proclaim over me ignorance with your careless words, stupidity.
Oh but stupid I am not, I see into a world you cannot comprehend.
I wash off the presumptions your words suggest.
Guess what, I am doing the best that I can...
and that is enough, I do not live subject to your standards.
You do not own me, no you don’t even see me;
you do not know who I am. I am so much more.
More than your view will ever see.

Copyright Â© Grace_and_Glory ... [ 2010-05-30 17:44:37]
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Re: Dear Someone (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Sunday, 30th May 2010 @ 10:47:05 PM AEST
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Angry powerful write,challenging, and declaring a feeling of self worth,recognise the pattern of rebelling to find that,and empowering declaration to conclude I am so much more! well written

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