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Array ( [sid] => 160203 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~The Sorrow~ [time] => 2010-05-28 17:42:18 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A sorrow grows so deep it's hard for me to bare,
full of broken promises, wishes never shared
The people who have come and gone
some early, tragic yet...those broken dreams and promises
will somehow go unmet
To understand and know, there are ones whose hurt run's deep
If I could only help them, in my arms I'd safely keep
Such sorrow grows within my heart, a seed that now takes root
the tears I've shed now water it and it seems to grow it's shoot
All I know is what I feel and the sunshine now is hid
dark storm clouds gather over, in it's rage I'm in the midst
I wish smiles for others, lifetimes of joy so sweet
I wish this sorrow would go away and in peace I'd live and dream.

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~The Sorrow~

Contributed by sammi23 on Friday, 28th May 2010 @ 05:42:18 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

A sorrow grows so deep it's hard for me to bare,
full of broken promises, wishes never shared
The people who have come and gone
some early, tragic yet...those broken dreams and promises
will somehow go unmet
To understand and know, there are ones whose hurt run's deep
If I could only help them, in my arms I'd safely keep
Such sorrow grows within my heart, a seed that now takes root
the tears I've shed now water it and it seems to grow it's shoot
All I know is what I feel and the sunshine now is hid
dark storm clouds gather over, in it's rage I'm in the midst
I wish smiles for others, lifetimes of joy so sweet
I wish this sorrow would go away and in peace I'd live and dream.

Copyright © sammi23 ... [ 2010-05-28 17:42:18]
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Re: ~The Sorrow~ (User Rating: 1 )
by jmorrison94 on Friday, 28th May 2010 @ 09:00:31 PM AEST
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i appreciate it i really do its kinda like a walt whitman and emily dickenson child no form but dark and keeps you reading, secluded but showing emotion very nice i look forward to more

Re: ~The Sorrow~ (User Rating: 1 )
by rambo56 on Saturday, 29th May 2010 @ 04:45:17 AM AEST
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nice words great write

Re: ~The Sorrow~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Grace_and_Glory on Saturday, 29th May 2010 @ 02:20:11 PM AEST
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I think this is beautiful :)

Re: ~The Sorrow~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Nevilleconnie on Sunday, 30th May 2010 @ 03:00:31 PM AEST
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The longing in this poem is heartbreaking, but so wonderfully written. You've written a wonderful poem here.

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