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I never once thought that you’d tear me apart.
And here I am fighting with all that I have,
To think of the good, and erase all the bad.
The past is not led though, it can’t be erased.
I live with my choices and all my mistakes.
How could I fall for the lies that you spoke?
I was the pun to your cruel heartless joke.
Something you wanted until it was yours.
I was that object, yeah I was that girl.
Needless to say, I did not have a clue.
All of your lies I believed were the truth.
Maybe I’m hopeless, and can’t find a guy.
A guy who is truthful, and never tells lies.
God only knows if this guy does exists.
The sky’s filled with stars that have heard of this wish.
Though it’s my faith, that is battered and bruised.
I know somewhere out there, there’s love that is true.
Though I can’t see him, I know there’s a guy,
Wishing on stars like I’m wishing tonight.
And yeah just like me, it’s his faith that is bruised.
But I know the saying, that love heals all wounds.
Though I don’t know when or where our paths cross
I know that I’ll wait. Cause true loves worth the cost.
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Waiting For Love

Contributed by Nevilleconnie on Wednesday, 26th May 2010 @ 10:19:35 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Shattered and lonely within my own heart.
I never once thought that you’d tear me apart.
And here I am fighting with all that I have,
To think of the good, and erase all the bad.
The past is not led though, it can’t be erased.
I live with my choices and all my mistakes.
How could I fall for the lies that you spoke?
I was the pun to your cruel heartless joke.
Something you wanted until it was yours.
I was that object, yeah I was that girl.
Needless to say, I did not have a clue.
All of your lies I believed were the truth.
Maybe I’m hopeless, and can’t find a guy.
A guy who is truthful, and never tells lies.
God only knows if this guy does exists.
The sky’s filled with stars that have heard of this wish.
Though it’s my faith, that is battered and bruised.
I know somewhere out there, there’s love that is true.
Though I can’t see him, I know there’s a guy,
Wishing on stars like I’m wishing tonight.
And yeah just like me, it’s his faith that is bruised.
But I know the saying, that love heals all wounds.
Though I don’t know when or where our paths cross
I know that I’ll wait. Cause true loves worth the cost.

Copyright Â© Nevilleconnie ... [ 2010-05-26 10:19:35]
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Re: Waiting For Love (User Rating: 1 )
by ammar on Wednesday, 26th May 2010 @ 10:39:52 AM AEST
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Now that's a really good write-straightforward and enjoyable. Never lose hope. As they say, someone somewhere's made for you.

Peace
Ammar

Re: Waiting For Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Tory on Wednesday, 26th May 2010 @ 11:37:54 AM AEST
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I really love this piece, the flow was wonderful, the rhyme smooth, this is a very good piece and I loved it, Good job. hope to read more soon...Tory

Re: Waiting For Love (User Rating: 1 )
by longhaircg on Wednesday, 26th May 2010 @ 12:26:41 PM AEST
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you sure got it down to the core of the matter, thankyou for sharing this it is so true.
SP

Re: Waiting For Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Thursday, 27th May 2010 @ 12:34:55 PM AEST
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this got me feeling a bit mushy inside, which is often rare i might add.
i believe you're doing the right thing unlike those other loose women out there.
your patience for true love will definitely be rewarded...

take care

-K.Z.

Re: Waiting For Love (User Rating: 1 )
by rambo56 on Wednesday, 2nd June 2010 @ 04:04:43 PM AEST
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sad but meaningful and patience is rewarded to all who wait god bless you

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