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[aid] => mick
[title] => Summer City Evening
[time] => 2010-05-26 01:33:48
[hometext] => Summer in the city
[bodytext] => I work the graveyard So my commute begins at nine But its 80 degrees in Boston So I'm feeling kinda fine As I wait for my train I smell something in the air Good old subway popcorn Reminds of the fair I'm a waiting a few minutes Cause the last train I missed I see the heat of the tracks And I've stepped in somones ***** The train as no AC So there is sweat on my brow The heat is getting to me Only two stops now The couples are dining And the lonely men lurk The city comes to life While I'm going to work Work is busy And I had no warning I can't wait to see My summer city morning dthomas89 PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit. Additionally, this does not apply to commenting on your own poem "Sitting and Thinking" and insulting other members of this site. Personal attacks and insults will not be tolerated at YPDC. Copy and paste this link into your browser on what Mick, the owner of this site, has to say about personal attacks. http://www.your-poetry.com/modules.php?name=Forums&file=viewtopic&t=4695&start=0&sid=7616c5639b7cc37745711b92a619942d Your comment on Sitting and Thinking has been removed. Demanding comments when you are not willing to offer comments on our other member's poems? By any chance, do you see any contradiction in that? [comments] => 1 [counter] => 135 [topic] => 43 [informant] => dthomas89 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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