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Array ( [sid] => 160057 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sweet Boy [time] => 2010-05-22 15:14:28 [hometext] => To my 5 Year Old Son - Adam. [bodytext] => I listened your rattle, my little boy,
And heard your pitter-pattering feet
As you grew from a baby I watched with joy
Your mutterings.... oh so sweet

We play for hours you and I
I watch you as you learn
I watch the twinkle in your eyes
As for more and more.... you yearn

You show me all your drawn art
And when our play is over
I carefully store it in my heart
My memories will last.... forever

Sweet boy of mine you cannot guess
How oft you cheer me up
For I know I am truly Blest
With laughter, love and happiness you certainly fill my cup.

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Sweet Boy

Contributed by Mick_Puttock on Saturday, 22nd May 2010 @ 03:14:28 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

I listened your rattle, my little boy,
And heard your pitter-pattering feet
As you grew from a baby I watched with joy
Your mutterings.... oh so sweet

We play for hours you and I
I watch you as you learn
I watch the twinkle in your eyes
As for more and more.... you yearn

You show me all your drawn art
And when our play is over
I carefully store it in my heart
My memories will last.... forever

Sweet boy of mine you cannot guess
How oft you cheer me up
For I know I am truly Blest
With laughter, love and happiness you certainly fill my cup.

Copyright © Mick_Puttock ... [ 2010-05-22 15:14:28]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Sweet Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by Breezy on Saturday, 22nd May 2010 @ 06:40:55 PM AEST
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Oh mick, this is adorably sweet. Children fill so much
of our lives, it kinda makes us wonder, what filled
that space before, you know? This is wonderful. A very
happy read. ^_^

-- Achelois

Re: Sweet Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 22nd May 2010 @ 09:19:22 PM AEST
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So you can still write. smiles.
It's beautiful and I'm sure when he's older he will cherish this.
Dang time flies. I didn't realize he is that old or young.
I appreciate our home here you work so hard to keep it going.
You're the best web master on this planet.
big huggs, blessings,
emy

Re: Sweet Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 22nd May 2010 @ 09:48:11 PM AEST
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dear mick, this is so beautiful! gosh! i cannot believe he's 5 already! time sure flies! it is great to see you posting too, much love and big hugs to you and your sweet family! ever nessa

Re: Sweet Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Saturday, 22nd May 2010 @ 11:06:55 PM AEST
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We play for hours you and I, how special is that time that you spend with your child as you see them grow...... you certainly fill my cup,straight from a parent's heart filled with the joy of the connection you have with your child.

Re: Sweet Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 23rd May 2010 @ 12:51:21 AM AEST
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Yayness, a poem from Mick!!! I think children are the best thing that can happen to us. This is how we live forever. This was good Mick. Definitely brought a smile to my ol' face as I am sure he does for you.

Well done, sir Mick. Smile!

Smile!

Tim

cool dude

Re: Sweet Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 2nd October 2010 @ 10:31:30 AM AEST
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Hey, can't believe I missed a poem of yours!! But looking back at the date it was posted, I realise it was when I was in Texas.

This is an absolute gen, like Adam is. I am certain he cherishes his time with you too and loves his dad very much.

Keep writing my friend...
((((((Hugs))))))
Jen

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