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Array ( [sid] => 16005 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => One Year [time] => 2003-04-14 22:45:00 [hometext] => My best friend died on April 13, 2002. This poem was written the morning of April 13, 2003. [bodytext] => One year,
I can’t believe it’s gone.
Seems like only yesterday
We were back in the sixth grade

Running
O so wild,
O so free.

A year ago
It all slipped away
So much has happened
So much has changed

Still
Some different
Some same.

366 days ago
I was a whole person
I had my best friend
Though so many miles apart.

Don’t
Know how
Know when

A year ago
You became an angel
Left it all behind
In search of a better place.

No more
Sadness
Pain

One Year,
I have a new niece now
I’ve seen more of the world
I’ve been through so much.

You’re
In heaven
Smiling Down


Last year,
At this time I had no clue
That all this was to happen
But I’d do it all again ten thousand times

Just to
See you
Talk to you

Just one year,
Seems like an entire lifetime
An eternity without you
But a minute with you

Would be
Heaven.





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One Year

Contributed by Elizabeth_Teresa on Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 10:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



One year,
I can’t believe it’s gone.
Seems like only yesterday
We were back in the sixth grade

Running
O so wild,
O so free.

A year ago
It all slipped away
So much has happened
So much has changed

Still
Some different
Some same.

366 days ago
I was a whole person
I had my best friend
Though so many miles apart.

Don’t
Know how
Know when

A year ago
You became an angel
Left it all behind
In search of a better place.

No more
Sadness
Pain

One Year,
I have a new niece now
I’ve seen more of the world
I’ve been through so much.

You’re
In heaven
Smiling Down


Last year,
At this time I had no clue
That all this was to happen
But I’d do it all again ten thousand times

Just to
See you
Talk to you

Just one year,
Seems like an entire lifetime
An eternity without you
But a minute with you

Would be
Heaven.









Copyright © Elizabeth_Teresa ... [ 2003-04-14 22:45:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: One Year (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 11:31:25 PM AEST
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Awww..this is so sad...I'm terribly sorry for your loss.. I love how you wrote this..It must have been hard to do...
Hugs
Jenni


Re: One Year (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 02:38:29 AM AEST
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I really feel for you I feel that about my mom it'll be almost 2 years!
So very sad! Christina


Re: One Year (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Teresa on Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 05:33:43 PM AEST
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I'm very sorry about the loss of your mother. I try to take comfort that our loved ones are in a better place, but at times its hard not to be selfish and want them back here with us.


Re: One Year (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Teresa on Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 05:36:09 PM AEST
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Jenny,
I thank you for your condolances and for your compliment. As hard as it was to write, there's nothing that could possibly come close to putting into words the great void that losing my best friend so young. She was only 20. There's not a day that passes that I don't miss her, and this grieving process is pretty rough at times.
E




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