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SO LONG
Contributed by
6whiteRoses
on
Wednesday, 19th May 2010 @ 10:44:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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When no one else was there for you
I WAS
When you needed a friend to listen
I DID
When you wanted to talk
I NEVER IGNORED YOU
When people put you down
I PICKED YOU BACK UP
I thought I could trust you
I LET YOU IN
But once again I was wrong
OUR FRIENDSHIP MUST END
You have hurt me to much
YOU BETRAYED ALL I AM
So you can do it alone
IM SORRY MY FRIEND
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Re: SO LONG
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by Nevilleconnie on
Thursday, 20th May 2010 @ 08:44:12 AM AEST
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| Wow, I can relate to this so much. A guy did the same thing to me. I was always there for him, and than he abandoned me. I can totally feel the raw emotion in this poem. Really great job!! |
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Re: SO LONG
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by omeoteotl on
Thursday, 20th May 2010 @ 01:04:11 PM AEST
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what emotion!
simple and simply powerful.
dont be angry, be thankful that a tumor was successfully removed from your side. god (if you believe) has something or someone better waiting for you.
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Re: SO LONG
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th June 2010 @ 10:09:57 AM AEST
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| ao.. i like it.. keep on writing.. n_n |
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