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Confessions
Contributed by
KismetsPoet
on
Wednesday, 12th May 2010 @ 06:09:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I clutch my pillow,
silent, weeping
You confessed
while I was sleeping
All your sins and
all your sorrows
To be forgotten
dawn tomorrow
I heard you say
you loved my eyes
You'd look at them,
think I'm a prize
I heard you say
you loved my lips
Plump and gloss-less
with each kiss
I heard you say
you loved my smile
White and perfect,
shined for miles
But here I sob
and here I see
You love my looks;
you don't love me
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Re: Confessions
(User Rating: 1 )
by Nevilleconnie on
Wednesday, 12th May 2010 @ 08:24:04 AM AEST
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| Why can't they love us for us, and not what we look like? I really enjoyed reading this. Very emotional. Great job. |
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Re: Confessions
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by Debris on
Wednesday, 12th May 2010 @ 01:25:55 PM AEST
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| This isn't my "type" of poem but I actually really liked it! Keep up the good work. |
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