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Rain and ME
Contributed by
annie
on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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IT IS RAINING AGAIN
I CAN HEAR IT FROM
UNDER THE COVERS OF
MY HIDE AWAY
IT IS THE DARKNESS
THE FIRST THING THAT
STRIKES ME AS I OPEN MY EYES
DARKNESS,
ALONE
MANY STEPS FROM THIS ROOM
TO FETCH MY MORNING COFFEE
ALONE,
HOW MANY TIMES HAVE I MADE
THAT TRIP
ALONE
I HAVE IT DOWN TO A TEE
MORNING COFFEE AND ME
GOOD MORNING AMERICA ON T.V.
THEN ITS REGIS AND KATHIE LEE
CAN'T FORGET THE LADIES OF THE VIEW
JEOPARDY AFTER THAT
SURPRISE I CAN ANSWER A FEW
ITS AFTERNOON, RAINING STILL
O.K. WITH ME
I WILL JUST TRACE MY FOOTSTEPS
BACK THE WAY I STARTED MY DAY
UNDER THE COVERS OF MY HIDEAWAY
IN THE DARK
ALONE.
05-10-2001
Aggie Anne
Copyright ©
annie
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2003-04-14 13:05:00]
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Re: Rain and ME
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 08:13:54 AM AEST
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This is so horrible (the exerience not the poem). I have felt like this. I felt totally alone and like I have nothing to look forward to and no-one to talk to. The poem expresses the feelings of hopelessness wonderfully. Great piece of work.
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Re: Rain and ME
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by norm on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 05:40:47 PM AEST
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A super poem expressing low, low, low
i, for one, love the rain. Being alone (for
a while) is OK...I can write a poem...
But, too long???
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Re: Rain and ME
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by dantoad on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 10:06:01 PM AEST
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sometimes rainy days are refreshing, to rest, and sometimes they are bummers...thats when you need to grab a bright purple umbrella and get out there!
-taste the rainbow-
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