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For her exquisite one time kiss
What more could come, to all but sate?
Enveloped by her seraph bliss

A smile as such is Heaven’s wrought
Flesh and blood in mortal coil
Once gazed upon, my smile is brought
Will make the heart as if to roil

She brings the Maker’s breath to bear
Life unto this dead man’s chest
And brings him dreams of all but err
Melodious thoughts of love’s unrest

Tangible lot, these gifts she brings
Whilst holding me in angelic wings
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Life is Breathed

Contributed by navydocny on Monday, 10th May 2010 @ 09:53:40 PM in AEST
Topic: PoemsonBeauty

None so sweet as made to wait
For her exquisite one time kiss
What more could come, to all but sate?
Enveloped by her seraph bliss

A smile as such is Heaven’s wrought
Flesh and blood in mortal coil
Once gazed upon, my smile is brought
Will make the heart as if to roil

She brings the Maker’s breath to bear
Life unto this dead man’s chest
And brings him dreams of all but err
Melodious thoughts of love’s unrest

Tangible lot, these gifts she brings
Whilst holding me in angelic wings

Copyright Â© navydocny ... [ 2010-05-10 21:53:40]
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Re: Life is Breathed (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 10th May 2010 @ 11:15:12 PM AEST
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Beautiful writing.
It's so good to know you're home safe and to see you posting once again.
Take care, friend.
Huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Life is Breathed (User Rating: 1 )
by nobodyJQ on Monday, 10th May 2010 @ 11:19:13 PM AEST
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that's beautiful, i can almost see it

You surely missed that mate.

great poem all in all

Re: Life is Breathed (User Rating: 1 )
by windowguy on Monday, 10th May 2010 @ 11:46:55 PM AEST
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Very good piece.

Re: Life is Breathed (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Tuesday, 11th May 2010 @ 01:12:10 PM AEST
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Hi,

Welcome home, Jack!

Trust it wasn't too rough out there?

Your relief is tangible in your poem.
Well written!

Tommy

Re: Life is Breathed (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 11th May 2010 @ 09:09:54 PM AEST
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First of all, glad to know that you are safe and sound, Steve. BIG yayness factor for that!!!

Secondly, beeeeeautiful writing!!!!

There was a softness and serenity in this.

Take care,

Tim
cool dude

cool dude

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