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Array ( [sid] => 159726 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ***So hard to just let go*** [time] => 2010-05-10 12:08:02 [hometext] => I got the idea for this one from a niece of mine, who had lost her mom 5 yrs ago and visits her grave every mothers day! [bodytext] => Mommy I sure miss you,
I sure wish you were here.
I need you to hold me,
mommy let me know you're here.

Come tell me a story,
the way you use to do.
remember back to when,
it was only me and you.

I think about the day,
you caught me in a lie.
you sent me to my room,
and you began to cry.

Mom, it's getting late,
I really need to go.
I just wanted to stop by,
to say I love and miss you so.

I will see you next year,
I'll be here Mothers day.
just like I do every year,
since you have went away.


I Love You, Mommy.....
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 141 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Tory [notes] => Corrected spelling as requested ~ Moderator_18 May 11, 2010 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
***So hard to just let go***

Contributed by Tory on Monday, 10th May 2010 @ 12:08:02 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Mommy I sure miss you,
I sure wish you were here.
I need you to hold me,
mommy let me know you're here.

Come tell me a story,
the way you use to do.
remember back to when,
it was only me and you.

I think about the day,
you caught me in a lie.
you sent me to my room,
and you began to cry.

Mom, it's getting late,
I really need to go.
I just wanted to stop by,
to say I love and miss you so.

I will see you next year,
I'll be here Mothers day.
just like I do every year,
since you have went away.


I Love You, Mommy.....




Copyright © Tory ... [ 2010-05-10 12:08:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: ***So hard to just let go*** (User Rating: 1 )
by Nevilleconnie on Monday, 10th May 2010 @ 01:38:28 PM AEST
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Brought tears to my eye's. You really are a fantastic writer.


Re: ***So hard to just let go*** (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 10th May 2010 @ 01:53:49 PM AEST
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sadly beautiful....

hugs n' love nessa




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