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MOTHER'S EVERYWHERE
Contributed by
lovingcritters
on
Saturday, 8th May 2010 @ 12:31:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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(A newborn's conversation with their Creator)
"Hi there God, Did you see me being born this day?
That last part was like being squeezed in a subway!
Good to be free, but I'm afraid I don't know what to do.
Would you mind if I questioned you?
,
God replies,
"Not at all dear child let me hold you close
to my heart"
'~'~'~'
"I can't walk, can't feed myself, I'm so tiny
and helpless, where do I start?"
'~'~'~'
God says,
"Never fear little one, an angel I've given
to care for you."
'~'~'~'
"But tell me please, I floated around
for nine whole months, singing, sucking
my thumb, it was lots of fun, then to
the womb I bid a adieu,
Will I be happy again too?"
'~'~'~'
God comforts,
"Your angel will sing, smile, and cuddle you close
Hug you, and lull you to sleep, until your love grows
'~'~'~'
"How can I know what they are saying?
Their language I don't know, for me
it's only burping."
'~'~'~'
God responds soothingly,
"Your angel will tell you the most beautiful stories
and sweet words galore.
Will teach you patiently to speak, and
soon your spirits will soar."
'~'~'~'
"What will I do if I want to speak to you?"
'~'~'~'
God answers kindly,
Your angel will say prayers with you
until you learn to pray alone.
Your heart strings will be closely sewn."
But,
"Who will protect me?
'~'~'~'
God reiterates,
"Risking it's own life your Angel will
protect you to the end.
Neither enemies, nor death, nor
sickness.....defend!"
'~'~'~'
But,
What about you God where will you be?
'~'~'~'
God decries,
"I'll always be by your side through your angel
I'll be your guide."
'~'~'~'
Then there was joy in Heaven,
and throughout the whole earth, a calm,
'~'~'~'
But,
What is my Angel's name?
'~'~'~'
God declared,
"You may lovingly call her
"Mom"
This was an email sent to me
from my dear friend Shari who
used to write poetry here at YPDC
Thank you Shari.......
The poem is mine.
"You were right God, this is really fun!"
'~'~'~'
Lovingcritters
ConSue
'~'~'~'
"Mothers hold their children's hands
for a short while, but their hearts forever."
~Author Unknown~
*Wombless Smiles*
Mother's Day
May 9, 2010
Copyright ©
lovingcritters
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2010-05-08 12:31:16]
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Re: MOTHER'S EVERYWHERE
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by emystar on
Saturday, 8th May 2010 @ 03:13:32 PM AEST
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Beautiful.
Happy mother's day mom.
huggs, love, blessings,
yobrat |
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Re: MOTHER'S EVERYWHERE
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by Nevilleconnie on
Saturday, 8th May 2010 @ 06:12:19 PM AEST
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| Such a beautifully written poem. That last line brought a tear to me eye. An absolutely amazing poem. |
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Re: MOTHER'S EVERYWHERE
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by nigmart on
Sunday, 9th May 2010 @ 03:56:48 AM AEST
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| You are almost sublime in your artistry, presentation and written word. A beautiful presentation. As always, my compliments and thanks for your artistry. Be well, Nigmart. |
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Re: MOTHER'S EVERYWHERE
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th May 2010 @ 11:18:47 PM AEST
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Wow, I loved this, Consue. Glad to see the color coding worked.
Tim  |
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Re: MOTHER'S EVERYWHERE
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by Breezy on
Monday, 10th May 2010 @ 08:31:19 AM AEST
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I am at a serious loss for words. This ...this is just
exquisite. It puts a lump in my throat and a warmth in
my heart. Such beautiful words, consue. And being
a mother, I understand explicitly the words you've
written. A fine post for Mother's Day. GORGEOUS!
Wonderful write! **hugs** --Marie
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Re: MOTHER'S EVERYWHERE
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 10th May 2010 @ 10:42:12 AM AEST
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awww so sweet!!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: MOTHER'S EVERYWHERE
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 11th May 2010 @ 09:53:47 PM AEST
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Aww Very beautiful conversation..
Thank you my friend, for sharing it..simply superb.
Respectfully..:-)venkat |
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Re: MOTHER'S EVERYWHERE
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by LandsleyAlexandre on
Sunday, 5th September 2010 @ 05:00:22 AM AEST
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| nice |
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