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Array ( [sid] => 159622 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => River of tears [time] => 2010-05-07 04:27:13 [hometext] => [bodytext] => i feel the darkness surrounding me as i sit alone
i know there is a light, but where is it?
the world is turning to chaos all around me
there is no hope for me anymore
i sit here alone, blood dripping from my wrist like tears
what have i done to deserve this world?
there should be a way to end it when i want to.
even that way has become to painful to deal with.
the violence in this world is taking their toll
the world is slowing taking my soul from me
i sit in the darkness as tears pour from my eyes like a river.
why can't somebody hold me and tell me everything will be okay?
maybe there is a way to end it and wipe the tears away...forever
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River of tears

Contributed by texas_tgirl on Friday, 7th May 2010 @ 04:27:13 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

i feel the darkness surrounding me as i sit alone
i know there is a light, but where is it?
the world is turning to chaos all around me
there is no hope for me anymore
i sit here alone, blood dripping from my wrist like tears
what have i done to deserve this world?
there should be a way to end it when i want to.
even that way has become to painful to deal with.
the violence in this world is taking their toll
the world is slowing taking my soul from me
i sit in the darkness as tears pour from my eyes like a river.
why can't somebody hold me and tell me everything will be okay?
maybe there is a way to end it and wipe the tears away...forever

Copyright © texas_tgirl ... [ 2010-05-07 04:27:13]
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Re: River of tears (User Rating: 1 )
by nobodyJQ on Friday, 7th May 2010 @ 05:03:41 AM AEST
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great poem keep them coming dear

Re: River of tears (User Rating: 1 )
by chrisdavid on Friday, 7th May 2010 @ 06:25:46 AM AEST
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Everything will be okay, I promise. A very deep meaning lies within this. Good write.
Take care, Chris.

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