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Array ( [sid] => 159593 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Moment of mistakes [time] => 2010-05-06 09:47:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The moment you feel
a lump in your throat
your oppurtinity failed
and you can never gloat

time move in slow motion
as you begin to fail
the un-fixable begains
as you stumble this trail

your heart freezes
your guts wrenched
sweat pours out
and you feel drenched

when the event unfolds
and the deed is done
you put your hands in your head
and wonder what went wrong

many hours pass
and you still feel some pain
the regret and anger
only yourself to blame

eventually you move on
untill you see her
and it returns ten fold
like inside you is ember

either she forgives
or your left alone
but remember
dont call her phone... [comments] => 1 [counter] => 124 [topic] => 32 [informant] => 619prisoner [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

The Moment of mistakes

Contributed by 619prisoner on Thursday, 6th May 2010 @ 09:47:53 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

The moment you feel
a lump in your throat
your oppurtinity failed
and you can never gloat

time move in slow motion
as you begin to fail
the un-fixable begains
as you stumble this trail

your heart freezes
your guts wrenched
sweat pours out
and you feel drenched

when the event unfolds
and the deed is done
you put your hands in your head
and wonder what went wrong

many hours pass
and you still feel some pain
the regret and anger
only yourself to blame

eventually you move on
untill you see her
and it returns ten fold
like inside you is ember

either she forgives
or your left alone
but remember
dont call her phone...

Copyright © 619prisoner ... [ 2010-05-06 09:47:53]
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Re: The Moment of mistakes (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 6th May 2010 @ 06:10:59 PM AEST
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so sad though beautifully written,

hugs n' love nessa

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