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[aid] => mick
[title] => Long diatance
[time] => 2010-05-06 08:58:42
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[bodytext] => I wrote these on the plane as I left New Zealand at the end of my exchange year. I don't know what I'm doing when it comes to poetry, some of the blocks work others don't. I was just writing my feelings down to get them out. The blocks don't follow eachother but I will edit them. I will applogize now for spelling because it was done on my phone, also explains the weird format. The second to last block is the only good one I miss you and wish that I could kiss u, but your so far away that I don't know wat to say. Sure we got facebook and skype, but no matter how much we type it's not the same, I want to hear ur voice call out my name I want to be in ur arms so u can shield me from the harm that comes from not seeing u It's been gettin me down and I can't find a way to turn my frown around Because Nothin can distract me from my atraction to you. Ur the most beautiful girl in the world, but this whirlwind of emotions has left me on the otherside of it Ur on the other dide of the ocean and it Gots me all emotional, why do I have to cry, why can't I just be a normal guy. Why can't I just enjoy life? Baby without u it feels like I got struck In the heart with a knife Our relationship had no resistance we were free. But now this distance is killing me. Not seeing u again is one of my greatest fears, I wish I could be with u, touch u, see u, anything to get rid I these tears. Ive tried it all, but loving u will be my downfall. As the days go by I realize how good I have it. Got family, friends, a car, a job, life is good bit i'd throw it all away if we were able to share one day. I never thought my time would end, we were more than friends. Two people who were **** ******* by that bastard father time. He killed our love, arrest him for his crime [comments] => 0 [counter] => 102 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Xjsado [notes] => Edited due to content not suitable for general exhibition. ~ Moderator_18 May 6, 2010 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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