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Array ( [sid] => 159577 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Whats the point [time] => 2010-05-05 21:38:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => What’s the point in living?
When I have to live without you
What was the point in letting you go?
When now there nothing I can do

You are now gone
Because I asked you to go
Now all I can think about
Is the life I’ll never know

The second that you left
Is the second that I cried
Would you come back
If I said that I lied?

Lied about not needing you
Or the love that you gave
I lied about not wanting you
It’s really your love that I crave

So what’s the point in wanting?
Everything we had
Why did we lose everything
Before we could afford to add

I wanted you as my sunshine
When the night become too dark
Then I drove you away
Without giving you a mark

A long time ago
I thought you were mine
But then I found out
That we were just not fine

So what’s the point in living?
When there nothing to live for
When’s the point in drinking
When there’s nothing left to pour

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 80 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Jessi95 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Whats the point

Contributed by Jessi95 on Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 09:38:41 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

What’s the point in living?
When I have to live without you
What was the point in letting you go?
When now there nothing I can do

You are now gone
Because I asked you to go
Now all I can think about
Is the life I’ll never know

The second that you left
Is the second that I cried
Would you come back
If I said that I lied?

Lied about not needing you
Or the love that you gave
I lied about not wanting you
It’s really your love that I crave

So what’s the point in wanting?
Everything we had
Why did we lose everything
Before we could afford to add

I wanted you as my sunshine
When the night become too dark
Then I drove you away
Without giving you a mark

A long time ago
I thought you were mine
But then I found out
That we were just not fine

So what’s the point in living?
When there nothing to live for
When’s the point in drinking
When there’s nothing left to pour

Copyright Â© Jessi95 ... [ 2010-05-05 21:38:41]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Whats the point (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 10:36:17 PM AEST
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Sad but great writing. Very creative.

When’s the point in drinking
When there’s nothing left to pour

These are my favorite lines. I loved your comparison.
blessings,
emy

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