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[aid] => mick
[title] => When I died... :)
[time] => 2010-05-04 15:44:33
[hometext] => one poem away from Shirin for once!
[bodytext] => I died today My soul flew up high I waved goodbye to my body And raised beyond the sky In this new place All seemed fine Until I read a sign “please wait in line” Single file, the souls stood Awaiting their turn To speak with one person Whom will inform them if they’ll burn I could not move but follow the line and wait I guess its not bad Its not like I have a date It was a sea of clouds That was our endless floor And at the end of the line Was a black and white door I see a woman Sitting at a desk Speaking to the people Giving them their task But the words are silent In fact I head nothing at all I cannot speak This is getting rather dull Like a DMV On a Monday afternoon Bring a brown bag Your not leaving soon After what seemed years Of being lost in my head I am next in line To find out what happens when you’re dead The lady was quite pretty her clothes were what and her skin was pale white flowing hair and soft pink lips a mature smile was familiar as well when she gave me that smile she spoke in my mind a sweet voice with words so kind… “You never did die Silly old man Please wake up And get to work when you can!” [comments] => 6 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 25 [informant] => 619prisoner [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 22 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
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